User blog comment:XrosHearts/Books & Cartoons/@comment-4368235-20111105234600

I checked it out & I have a few questions & stuff:

1) Do you want it to actually be the length of a real book? Cause if so the chapters need to be longer.

2) Maybe try to make your descriptions more creative, like this~ "You shall never suceed!" said the dragon as blue as the sea...

3) Also make sure you have correct spelling, since you mispelt "destroy".

That's all for now.