User blog comment:Survivor321/Survivor: Nicaragua blog episode 2: "Over the Edge"/@comment-4353921-20121222213425

This seems very well thought out! :)  Are these contestants from actual Survivor episodes?   I can't keep them straight without a chapter 1 intro for them.  And to make the story more engaging, maybe you could describe in more detail what each challenge is and what each contestant does at those challenges?  :)  Nice start, though. :)  Keep writing!