Total Drama Author 5

A lot of people think that they are great authors. Over half of these people are mediocre. This is not only a camp where people are getting their writing skills improved but they are competing to be the best author.... Who will prove that they have the skills? Who will crumble under the pressure? Who will rise to the occasion?

'''This... is... TOTAL! DRAMA! AUTHOR! 5!!!'''

How It Works

 * 1) Two teams of ten people each will be constructed.
 * 2) The teams will compete in challenges. (i.e. Write a story where Lindsay and Tyler break up OR write a story where Beth suddenly becomes popular OR write a story about the contest itself.)
 * 3) Chimmy and Shane will read and judge the stories, and determine which team wins.
 * 4) The winning team is invincible!
 * 5) Chimmy/Shane (Whoever judged the losing team) will pick whoever was the best author on the team that week.
 * 6) The best person on the losing team will pick two of their teammates to be up for elimination.
 * 7) The bottom two will give reasons to stay in the game.
 * 8) Nalyd and Sunshine will determine who goes home (The only guarantee that one is safe is if they're on the winning team, or they win an individual challenge).
 * 9) Repeat the above steps.
 * 10) Later in the game, there will be a merge, and the two teams will become the Best-Sellers.
 * 11) More challenges, stories, elimination.
 * 12) One author will be left and will be declared the best author ever!!

Contestants
This season, twenty contestants will compete. It is requested that people provide an avatar of themselves on the talk page.

Writing Gophers

 * 1) Reddy (Im so gonna pwn everyone. XD maybe....not? XD lol)
 * 2) Mrodd
 * 3) Jessica(Wow...I actually signed up...interesting...the others gotta watch out for me!
 * 4) Codaa5
 * 5) IHeartTDInTDA
 * 6) Josie Amber
 * 7) Sonictksb (In it to win it)

Typing Bass

 * 1) Usitgz (I madeit!)
 * 2) Spenstar I'm gonna WIN!!!
 * 3) Tcf09- Tcf09
 * 4) Oweguy (I'm back and I'm gonna be the greatest author! Or not)
 * 5) TBTDIF (Time to get back.)
 * 6) Jason
 * 7) Webly (It's May 10 wiki time)

Eliminated

 * 1) K-rocks19
 * 2) Kevvy9 (I hope I win)
 * 3) Vick0971 (bring it on)
 * 4) Fanny (Boo yah!)
 * 5) TDAFan99
 * 6) Ben(I have a feeling I'm gonna go early but hey whatevs)

Elimination Table
Color Code:

[User] = Writing Gopher

[User] = Typing Bass

WIN = Won that week's challenge

BOW = Was the best of the worst/nominator that week

SAFE = Was not eliminated that week

NOM = Was in nominated but was not eliminated

OUT = Was eliminated

N No story was submitted by this person this week.

I Incomplete story was submitted by this person this week.

D This person dropped out before a decision was made.

Week One Chat
Announcer: *Contestants step off a bus one by one and step into the giant library* *voice comes over loudspeaker* Greetings contestants! Twenty of you have been accepted to take on the challenge of becoming the top author! The best of the best! The head kahuna! Only one of you will walk away with the prize of - Sunshine, what are you doing in here?! Sunshine get away from the controls! Hey! Chimmy! Get away from that button! NO! *voice goes off*

Nalyd: *walks into library* Um.... Hi.

Jessica: Hello! I'm Jessica! I am very flirty, I am a pacifist and a vegetarian, I am a little bossy and I am very cute...(I am doing my fav couple, Lindsay-Tyler)

Shane: *walks in* Wow Nalyd...this place is bigger than I remember it. Did you get a bigger budget? Or did you finally get that hobo out of the microwave?

Usitgz: I'm back, and ready to give this another shot!

Sarah: Dibs on CxD! I'm a super fangirl! They're sooooo adorable ^_^ I don't care what anyone else has to say about them. CxD FOREVER! So um ya... Bonjour mes amis! =)

Mrodd: *Stares*

Oweguy: I'm back. And I'm on the Typing Bass again. Interesting.

Reddy: im making a GxT story! :D Go writing Gophers! lol I cant wait to post my story :)

Webly: My team has some great players! This is definitely going to be an exciting competition.

Spenny: *enters on his bike* Hey guys. Hey about the first challenge, can we do a TDI couple getting married instead of being already married?

Reddy: I believe u can as long as you sow some time for them being married, like what I did

Ben:*just notices theres a chat* Ello Govs.

Ben:*walks to reddy* I'm sorry to say red but my team is going to PWN YOURS *evily laughs and runs to his team* Hey guy so glad to meet you OWE were on the same team and RANT RANT RANT RANT RANT RANT

Shane: *covers Ben's mouth* Shut it, I need my beauty sleep.

Ben:Sleep who needs sleep I can stay up all night all the time like that one time I stayed up with my freiendsand they all passed out on the couch while I watched tv and RANT RANT RANT RANT

Usitgz: Will you please not talk so much Ben. Well, anyways, so far my story the only one that doesn't have kids in it so yeah, I'm unique!

Ben:Well mine rocks more and this sugar isn't helping *shows chocolate wrappers everywhere*

Kev: Can I quit cuz I want to if I can but I like it it's just I suck at writing?

Shane: Sorry Kev, you can't quit. You know how many people want to be here? If you quit, you'd just be wasting a valuable space.

Kev: I will not do the challenge I mite do it but if I have to do homework and stuff I mite not do the challenge

Reddy: This annoys me. your wasting a spot in a camp that could have been usded for a great author to become known. im.......ugh.

Shane: Kev, I had homework to do, yet I won TDA4. Seriously Kev, you're just being lazy.

Ben: Kev you have til friday finiush your omework and ork on your story I have homework to everyone does you have 3 days it should take two K

Kev: I get alot of it like 8 homeworks a day

Shane: So did I, yet I won TDA4. You know, my mom told me that if you're good at making excuses, you'll never be good at anything else.

Chimmy: Brady's my bro? O__O

Spenny: I knew you'd like my choice of a last name for Brady. :P

Chimmy:...yay! My brother's hot! XD

Shane: Kev, you wished to quit. I will honor your decision, and you will be eliminated once the judging is over.

Mrodd: (CONF)This reminds me of something, so familiar- yet so far away... * Sighs*

Challenge One
Nalyd: For this week's challenge, you must write a canon TDI couple grown up and married. Canon relationships include Courtney-Duncan (unfortunately...), Beth-Brady, Bridgette-Geoff, Gwen-Trent, Izzy-Owen, LeShawna-Harold, and Lindsay-Tyler. Remember to write them in character. Due Friday. It will be judged on creativity, originality, in-character-ness, spelling, and grammar. Also, you may be interested to know that the two worst stories from each team will be eliminated automatically. That's four people going home.

Judging
Nalyd: Shane get Gophers, Chimmy gets Bass.

Shane's Judging
Reddy - Well Reddy, I can honestly say that this was one of the best stories this week. There were no spelling or grammar mistakes, and everyone was in character, but there were a few errors. You see, you switched tenses. You can only have one tense in a story. You obviously wanted to do past tense, you did said, asked, and that sort of stuff, but you did things like comes, walks, drives. You should've done walked, came, drove, that sort of stuff to make it agree with past tense. But overall, nice job, amazing job, actually.

Mrodd - This was a sweet story, but several grammar errors. Most glaring one, you put different people's quotation in the same paragraph. Don't do that, every time there is a new person speaking, make a new paragraph. The other problem is, is that you had several fragments. In many places, you should have put commas instead of periods. The last part, is always, ALWAYS put a space after a period. There were a couple spelling errors, but not many. Overall, mediocre entry.

Jessica - Basically, it's the same as Mrodd, always have a new paragraph each time a new person speaks. Also, the story was confusing, have the past come before the present, so it leads up to the present. Also, Puking is spelled as...well....puking. Not pewking. However, the Lindsay and Tyler were in character. Like Mrodd, Mediocre, although a little better than mediocre.

Codaa - Okay, wow. The characters were truly in character, great grammar and spelling. This could actually happen, that's how in character Duncan and Courtney are. Overall, amazing entry. Dude, you're a great writer.

Sarah - Well, I know your writing, the thing is, you know the paragraph rule, and I've explained it enough, but I'll explain it again. When a new person speaks, make a new paragraph. However, this was pretty life-like. I liked this story, though the giant paragraph takes away from the story. However, even through the giant paragraph, it was a good entry.

TDAFan99 - Wow, um, once again, how many times to I need to explain the paragraph rule? Every time a new person speaks, there should be a new paragraph. This is full of errors. The most prominent one is the lack of quotation marks. It's hard enough to read a giant paragraph of text, it's hard enough to read a giant wall of text without quotation marks in some areas. In the beginning, the proposal was very random and it didn't flow. I mean, it did not flow at all. Overall, this wasn't that good of an entry.

Josie Amber - Can I get a perfect? PERFECT! Okay, Josie, you did phenomenal! This has to be the best entry this week. Okay, it is the best entry this week. Josie, Gwen and Trent were in character, the kids were believable and incredibly cute, but best of all, it flowed beautifully! Over all, I look forward to more of your work. Josie, this was awesome. Really, it was.

K-Rocks - Fine, you have your wish, but let me tell you this, lots of people wanted that spot, and you got it. However, you wasted it! Dude, you wasted my time. It's not that hard to submit an entry. You were just being lazy. To all future Total Drama Author contestants, if you can't balance Total Drama Author and real life together, than DON'T sign up. Someone else could've signed up whom was actually worth my time.

Vick - Okay, in a word, this was...bad. It was far too short. Plus, you misspelled but. Dude, really? It's gonna take a lot more than that to win this game. Overall, extremely weak entry. Extremely weak entry.

Sonic - Um, wow? Thing is, the paragraph rule, when a new person speaks, YOU MAKE A NEW PARAGRAPH! It's not that hard people. Anyway, while Lindsay was in character, this was not a very good entry. You see, it didn't flow well at ALL! I mean at ALL! Look, if you wanna win this thing, you'll have to step it up. And another thing, you never capitalized Mani, or Cure. They're names. You capitalize names. You also capitalize things after a period, question mark, and an exclaimation point. Overall, weak entry.

My Elimination Choice - Okay, I know whom I'm picking to be eliminated, K-Rocks. Dude, seriously? Why'd you sign up? Like I said, if you can't balance Total Drama Author with real life, don't sign up at all.

The Best of the Worst For This Team - This is another easy choice. The BOW is....Josie Amber! She had a flawless story, and the best story this week out of everyone in the competition IMO. Overall, Josie, you've earned this BOW.

Chimmy's Reviews
Usitgz: Great! C and D were definetly in character, though I think they would seem a bit sadder when Brittney had just died. Nice incorporation of the other TDI characters, I LOL’d with the Noah part. My only complaint is that it wasn’t too apparent that they were married. Other than that, great job.

Fanny: No story, no review.

Spenstar: As I stated before...YAY! HOT BROTHER! XD But putting that aside, I thought the story was really sweet. I can’t complain about anything with Brady being out of character, as...well, he wasn’t really given too much character in the first place. You gave him a believable one, though, and Beth seemed perfect. It seems that Beth would make an attempt to honor her friend in such a way, and good call changing the song lyrics. No grammar mistakes either. Exceptional job.

Kevvy: No story, no review. But I will say this...well, basically what Shane said above for K-Rocks. And you know what else? You say you had little time for this, and yet you sign up for more camps. -_-

TCF09: This wasn’t my favorite entry. While it was an interesting concept, there were several grammar issues. For example, ‘dround’ should be ‘drowned’. Not only that, I’m not that sure how much Gwen and Trent were in character. As before...not my favorite.

Oweguy: Seems Brittney has been reincarnated. XD This was a good story. You went into some of the most detail on a baby birth, but you didn’t go..well, THAT far, which I appreciate. I don’t think Geoff was the most in character, but other than that this was a great entry.

Ben: This was an OK concept, but overflowing with grammatical issues. For example, ‘to’ should be ‘too’, and so on. Also, I don’t think Tyler would be that mad, as he’s a fairly agreeable person, if a bit overconfident in himself. Overall, not the best.

TBTDIF: I don’t know what to say...this was definetly a unique entry. I didn’t notice any grammar issues, but Owen and Izzy weren’t in character. Owen would still be happy-go lucky, and Izzy would be relativley insane, even at this age.

Jason: LOL Geoff. XD This was a great story...though the death made me a little sad. *sniffle* It seems likely that one of their children would go on to be a surfer, and everyone was in character. I felt that you were hinting something at the ‘more than just kissing’ part, though. >_> Also, you could have merged a couple of sentences, but overall a great entry.

Webly: AWWWWW. Cliche moments FTW! XD Bridgette and Geoff seemed fairly in character, and the kids were cute and ambitious. I nearly did a spit take when Geoff was reading that magazine, though. XD There were a few grammar issues, but other than that it was a good story.

My Elimination Choice - I think my choice is pretty obvious...Kevvy, Fanny, neither of you submitted and entry. However, you, Fanny, are safe for now. Kevvy, You are my choice for elimination If you can't balance TDA5 with real life, don't sign up, and don't contradict yourself in the meantime.

The Best Of The Worst For This Team - Again, an obvious choice. DJ Spenstar, congrats. You are the best of the worst thanks to your great story. Good job. :D

Decision
Nalyd: Okay, Kev, K-Rocks, time to go. HOWEVER, Chimmy and Shane, you each need to pick one more person from the team you judged to be eliminated. A total of 4 people are going home this week...

Shane: I pick Vick to be eliminated. Sorry dude, it's just that you had the shortest story, and you need more than that to win this.

Chimmy: It wouldn't me fair for me to eliminate anyone else but Fanny. Sorry dude, I can't eliminate anyone else fairly.

Spenny: *does a wheelie on his bike* WOOT!! Safe and BoTW! What more can a man ask for?

Chimmy: Shadow the Hedgehog tacklehugging ME for a change. :P JK

Sonik: phew, I thought I would be going but now, i think i'm gonna win,( (CONF) or at least make it to the merge!)

TBTDIF: I don't exactly get the rules...so after this round, the BOW will be used, and they'll decide who to nominate, and then the judges vote one of those guys out? Like the first season?

Shane: Yeah, thing is, though, BOW was used this week, but the judges chose who went home this week instead of the BOW. So, it counts this week, but it's just another pretty mark on the elimination chart. XD

Week Two Chat
Nalyd: One week in, and 20% of you have been eliminated...

Webly: (CONF) I'm not surprised that I survived the elimination. I'm excited that I'm still in though!

Reddy (CONF): Booyah! Made it through that challenge, and i plan on going through the rest! >:D

Spenny: *sings* Stayin' alive, stayin' alive. Ah ah ah ah, staying aliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive! *stops singing, laughs, bearhugs Nalyd* I'm still in it, Ima gonna win it!

Jason: Can it male and female? Or only one sex?

Sarah: Can I turn this in tomorrow evening? I just do not have anytime to write for the contest this evening. I have to write two journal entries for Civics. I have to write a song to Roe v. Wade for a Civics project, and I have to fill out my reading log for LA, and read two scenes from the Diary of Anne Frank, and let's not forget I have to mark my two best entries in my Writer's Notebook. I'll still be turning it in on Thursday, but could I have until 8:30 or 9:00 tomorrow night? I'm certain I can get it in by then.

Sarah: I may need another day, apparently I'm grounded or something so, I'll have to turn it in tomorrow. I'll get RIGHT on it after school, and I should have it in by like 5 pm or something.

Usitgz(Conf.): I think my story is better this week than last.

Challenge Two
This week's challenge will be a personality switch of sorts. You must switch two TDI character's personalities, and have them meet. For example, you can write Duncan as a sarcastic bookworm, and Noah as a juvie escapee, and have them meet while Noah is vandalizing the library. (Please don't use this example.) The challenge is due on Thursday.

Judging
Chimmy: According to Nalyd, I get Gophers, Shane gets Bass.

Chimmy's Reviews
I would like to thank Nalyd for giving me only a few reviews to write, knowing my busy schedule. But honestly, I am EXTREMLEY disappointed in you guys. Less than half of your teams submitted an entry. As far as I remember, the winners of their respective season of TDAuthor did not miss ONE entry. Not ONE. Those who did submit an entry, good for you. Even if you didn’t get the greatest review, I can guarantee your safety because of this.

Reddy: ….um….wow. O_O It was certainly an interesting mix-up, though…even with Gwen’s personality and hatred towards Katie and Sadie, I don’t think um…well, Katie would break laws. Gwen doesn’t seem like that. Also, I would think Gwen would be attracted to Trent, but she was so ticked I can’t asses it well. Overall, though, it was a good story, though….but you did spell assaulted as assukted. XD

Mrodd: This was fairly good. The ‘little of what she had to offer’ part made me spit up my drink, though. XD However, I don’t think you dug deep enough into their personalities. Justin is much more than hot, (Or in this case, Courtney.) and Courtney (Or is it Justin?) didn’t seem explored at all.

Jessica: This seemed, well…incomplete, at best. I copied this into MS Word, and it was barely a half page long. Also, I think that this contained little of DJ’s personality, and only a bit more of Courtney’s. Overall….meh.

Codaa: No story, no review.

IHeartTDInTDA: No story, no review.

TDAFAN99: No story, no review.

Josie Amber: While this was pretty good, it still had it’s issues. Eachother’s is not a word, it should be separated into each other’s. Also, as far as I know, Bridgette (Or Gwen?) does not jog, but you may have been conformed to this because of the setting of your story. I have to commend you on making Bridgette’s klutzy side apparent, though, and aside from these issues the story was pretty good.

Sonictksb: No story no-ah, what the heck…

Shane's Reviews
Sorry for not getting these up earlier, I was moving, so no internet. Anyway, onto these things.

Usitgz: This was a pretty good story, though there was a couple mistakes. First one, squealed is spelled as squealed. Second, it should be Duncan and Cody asked in unison. Not Duncan, and Cody asked in unison. You didn't need that comma. The last thing, you should always use commas, not parenthesis to show actions, as parenthesis take away from the feel of the story. Although this is a big review, this was a fantastic story. Nice job! =)

Spenstar: Well, there are no grammar or spelling mistakes, there still are a few mistakes. One: this story's quite short, but sweet. Two: where's Beth acting like Lindsay? Lindsay's dumb. Beth here, wasn't dumb. Overall, though, this was a short, simple, sweet story. I really liked this story, though my only true complaint, is that it should be longer IMO. But great job this week. Great job.

TCF09: Well, while the characters were in character, this story is overflowing with mistakes. I, when standing alone and when used in contractions, should always be capitalized. Also, forward is spelled forward. Always capitalize names, even when they're not speaking. Safety is spelled safety. Whenever something is possessive, put an apostrophe and an S. Things is spelled things. I'm should have a capitalized I. Courtney's is possessive. Harvard is spelled Harvard. Effect should have been affect. A oh should have been An oh. I needs to be capitalized. Harold needs to be capitalized. Interrupted is spelled as interrupted. Memorize is spelled as memorize. There is should be there are. Brunet is spelled as brunet. Shooked, should really just be shook. She's should be she's. Referring is spelled as referring. That's a ton of misspelled words. My advice, use Microsoft word. Because of the mistakes, not that good of an entry.

Oweguy: No entry, makes my job easier.

Ben: No entry.

TBTDIF: Well...this was quite short...and it was hard to tell that Trent and Geoff switched personalities. Anyway, while is was an okay entry, it was far to short. I mean, REALLY short. Anyway, You said that Noah chased Geoff and Noah, I think you mean Noah chased Geoff and Trent. I also think you shouldn't have shown the reaction of all those people. It takes away from the actual story, and it's confusing. Overall, okay entry.

Jason: Well...this was short. Anyway, LeShawna would not cuss, and Beth isn't a little wimpy girl like her personality is shown in this story. Beth is willing, not scared, and LeShawna is NOT snobby. Anyway, this wasn't that good of an entry. Jason, I know you can do better. I just know you can.

Webly: Well....Bridgette certainly is crazy in this story. XD Anyway, this was an okay story, although there should have been more commas. Oh, and never use parenthesis in a story, it takes away from the actual story. Anyway, this was a funny story, though it could be better. My final verdict, this was a better than average.

Decision
Nalyd: Well, its safe to say that the Gophers lose by a lot. Chimmy, who is the BoW for the Gophers?

Chimmy: I would say Reddy, thank you good sir. :P

Elimination Ceremony Two
Nalyd: Reddy, your nominations please.

Reddy: I pick Sonik and TDAFan99. sorry guys, but Ive seen codaa and iHeart do better, and I know they tried to get a story finished. sorriez.

Reddy: And i also wont be here next week, so Ill give a reason to stay for that XD. Reason for no story next week: I would have turtned in a story if i wasnt at camp this week. I believe you all know i would've if i couldve. bye. XD

Nalyd: Sonik, TDAFan99, why do you deserve to stay?

TDAFan99: I'm sorry I didn't turn in an entry. But sometimes I was off the computer and not checking on Total Drama Author, but if you keep and I'll try harder next time and even make my Challenge 2 story. Thanks and I respect your descion either way if you keep me or Sonik. But I love this camp and I want to win it. I'll try harder next time if I have a next. This must be a hard descion for the three of you. I'll try to be a better Author. Thank you Nalyd, Chimmy, and Shane.

Sonik: I couldn't turn in a entry because of my laptop being repiared. I know this was coming and if anyone should be going tonight, it might be me. And if I do leave tonight, I'll try to become a better writer for next season. But I really do want to stay, and I missed seasons 3 and 4. I'll try harder in the next challenge if I stay. This must be a hard descion for the three of you. This is my reason to stay.

Nalyd: Okay, I think that both of you are equally deserving to stay. You both need to work on your writing, but one of you needs to go... TDAFan99, I'm sorry, but you have been eliminated. I do hope that you keep workin on your writing. I think that you'll be a great author if you keep working.

Week Three Chat
Nalyd: Only 15 remain...

Oweguy: Sorry I wasn't here last challenge. BTW. You didn't put our names for challenge three.

Webly: I have to get mine up on Thursday because I'm on my dad's computer because my computer is installing something that's taking all night. :( I hope that's alright!

Week Three Challenge
Okay guys, in the spirit of summer, your challenge is to write any of the Total Drama contestant's last day of school! You get to write the last day of school for any Total Drama series character! This does include Sierra and Alejandro in case your wondering. This will be judged on creativity, how much the characters are in character, and of course, grammar and spelling.

Reddy's Story
Im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorrry i didnt submit an entry. I was at camp. ;( But, hey, at least i have a reason. :P

Mrodd's Story
Not exactly How we planned.

The bell had just rang, and everyone was rushing to get home as soon as possible. Everyone had places to go and people to see… Well all except one.

“Vote for Courtney! I promise to make next year the best ever! Courtney shouted trying to talk over the mob that would soon crush her. Luckily for her, her boyfriend pushed her out of the way.

“What was that for?” She screeched, oblivious to the mob running past her.

Duncan face palmed. “Sorry but I don’t want my only girl friend to be in the hospital all Summer!”

He then embraced her and started kissing her on the lips, only to be pushed away by an angry Courtney. “Not in public! Especially when I’m campaigning!”

“Whoa, sorry!” He apologized walking off.

“Boyfriend being a pain?” Asked a voice behind her.

“Yeah! He just won’t leave me alone! It’s the Summer! I can spend as much time with him as I want!” She turned. “Oh… Justin”

“ SO anyways… Geoff’s hosting a party tonight want to come?” Courtney just kept staring as his body.

“ Uhh. Sure” She replied.

“K pick you up at 9” He said as he walked out.

“Would Miss Courtney O’Reilly report to the office please?” The loud speaker boomed.

Courtney started to walk to the office only to see the principle with the “Disappointed” look. “Courtney follow me” Before she could say anything he started walking, straight to the detention room.

“Wait! How did I get a detention?” She yelled.

He grunted then pushed her in. She scanned the room and noticed; Lindsay, Trent, Gwen and Noah were all there. But they never got detentions. “Hey” She waved.

She walked over to the quartet. “So why you all here?”

“We don’t know, you?” Gwen replied.

“She probably doesn’t know either!” An Irritated Noah yelled.

“He’s right.” She frowned. “And I was going to go to a party; I guess that won’t be happening detentions end at 9!”

“Ugh! I was really looking forward to going!” Trent said smiling at Gwen.

“I have a plan! I saw in this movie… I think it was called Run, before they eat you.” Lindsay squealed.

“Lindsay has a plan? The world is going to end!” Noah laughed.

“It’s ok keep going” Courtney said.

“We break out through the windows!” Lindsay yelled.

“Seems easy enough, not like they are barred or anything.” Gwen said looking at them.

“Ok so grab a chair and run at the windows, this is the bottom floor so we should be fine.”

They each grabbed a chair and ran at the window, Lindsay and Trent slipped, but the other 3 made it out. Trent grabbed Lindsay and jumped out of one of the smashed windows. “We did it!” Trent shouted.

“Thanks Lindsay” Gwen smiled.

“Yeah thanks” Noah grinned.

Courtney hugged Lindsay “Thank you”

“You are all welcome! From the heart of my bottom!” The four others face palmed as they all walked onto the last bus.

Jessica's Story
Sorry for the lack of story. I was sick and threw-up. I was actually going to put my story up today. :-( Guess I'll be nominated if my team loses...

JosieAmber's Story
The Last Day Today is the final day of school. When everyone is saying good bye to friends. The last day where everyone is sad or happy about leaving. As Duncan walked into school he watched as everyone started hugging and saying good bye before the day even started. "Wow," Duncan said with an annoyed tone in his voice looking at the cheerleaders all hugging each other sobbing their eyes out.

Duncan made his way to his locker and pulled out his notebook that he liked to doodle in, when he wasn't paying attention in class. He closed his locker quickly only to see Courtney behind the locker door. "Hey Duncan," Courtney said while smiling.

He looked into her eyes and smiled at the ego maniac of a girl who he loved to call his girlfriend.*Ding! Ding!* "Thats the five minute bell, we better get to class,"Courtney informed Duncan.

"Oh come on live a little," Duncan said smirking at Courtney.

Both walked to class hand in hand until they got to the door. Every one filed into the class in a quick but ordered manner going straight to their seats. Courtney sat in the first seat like the good girl she is while Duncan took his seat next to Trent and DJ. "Okay class today is our last day, when I call your name please come up to my desk and hand in you books," Mrs. Henry announced.

She called everyone one by one to her desk and they all handed her their science books even Courtney. Then it was Duncans turn. He slowly walked up to the desk with his book. "Please take your book sock off the cover Duncan,"Mrs. Henry instructed.

Duncan slowly took of the skull heads book sock off and uncovered his book only to show a drawn on, ripped, shredded, and broken book. He smirked at the sight of it remebering how the fatal death of his book happened. He flashed back to when he was using it to chase Harold down the hall to beat him up and he damaged it when he chased Harold into the woodshop room only for it to be flung in front of a saw. He came back to reality and relized the teacher was looking at him. He looked at the duck tape on his book to hold it together and then the teacher. The teacher just looked away and then Duncan sat down.Classes went by quickly and before they knew it last period class started.

Courtney had an excuse to miss Gym and she went off to the office where she helped out. "Time to have some fun," Duncan said enthused.

Today they were playing dodgeball for half of the period and then they were allowed to sign yearbooks. Duncan, Trent, Dj, and Tyler were on the same team with half of the class, while Owen, Heather, Gwen, and Noah were on the other team with the other half of the class. Duncan threw dodgballs at every one and soon enought the opposite team lost. They had time for only one more game. The end result Duncan's team lost and the kids walked to the cafeteria where they would sign yearboooks with everyone else. By then Courtney was back and she gave Duncan a hug and then set out to sign peoples yearbooks with her old election pencil she had made from when she audition for Total Drama.

Duncan wandered around and signed a few year books and met up with Gwen."Hey!" Duncan said to Gwen smiling while giving her a hug.

"I'm going to miss everyone so much,"Gwen said looking at Duncan.

Duncan nodded his head in agreement and then took her year book and wrote her a note and then signed his name. Gwen took his and signed her name also leaving a note for him to read. Gwen sighed and walked around to get others to sign her year book. Duncan caught up with Trent and signed his year book. The last bell finally rang and everyone walked to their lockers so they could go home. Gwen found Duncan at his locker and hugged him. Trent standing next to her with the rest of the Total Drama gang said goodbye one by one. Courtney wrapped her arms around Duncan's one arm and stood by his side. The whole cast of Total Drama left the school and went to their buses. Gwen, Duncan, Courtney, and Noah all went home on the same bus. Before Duncan left with Courtney to go home he said good bye to Noah and gave one last hug to his dear friend Gwen.

Soniktksb's Story
Last Day of Lame school

On the last day at Black Cone High School

"Alright class, you will be playing Dodgeball, you will have 5 minites to hide somewhere

thourghout the school, whoever doesn't get chaught will gradute" The Boring Phys ED teacher siad

"Yippie" Lindsay shouted

"Boring" Courtney murmred

"Courtney, if you don't get moving you won't graduate" shouted the Teacher.

"Fine".said Courtney

After 2 hours almost everyone in the school got chaught, only 24 teens where left.

"He better not find us." Whispered Duncan to Courtney, Lindsay and Geoff.

"If I graduate, I'm gonna have the awesomeist Party you can imagine." Geoff shouted, grabbing everyone's attention.

"Be quiet or we'll get caught you idiot."Courtney said back

"Whatever." Geoff Replied

(TBC)

Usitgz's Story
Ezekiel's First Summer (A continuation of my last entry :D)

"Ezekiel honey, wake up," Ezekiel's mother told him as she woke him up, "It's your last day of school."

"It ends?" asked Ezekiel. Ezekiel first went to a public school when he turned 17. He enrolled in White Pines High as a junior. Before he went to a public school he was home schooled by his mother. When he was home schooled, he never had a summer vacation, and he was taught year round.

"Yes, honey, it does, and today is a half day," answered Ezekiel's mother.

"Oh...okay," happily responded Ezekiel. Ezekiel ate breakfast, took a shower, and went through his other morning routines. He packed up his lunch, which included a venison sandwich, and lots of freshly killed venison jerky. He packed his school supplies into his backpack, and rushed out of his house onto the bus.

Once Ezekiel arrived at school, he saw Cody and Sierra making out passionately, and rolled his eyes. He made it over to his locker, were some of his friends were huddled.

"Happy first summer, Zeke!" exclaimed Tyler.

"Have a great summer," Harold said warmly

"Good job, Z!" congratulated Gwen.

"Yeah...um...good job," said Noah.

"Thanks guys!" thanked Ezekiel as he moved towards his locker. When he reached the locker he jerked it open with all his might, because it was stuck, and accidently slammed Tyler on the nose with it.

"Are you okay?" all of the friends questioned Tyler. Tyler's nose was bleeding pretty badly.

"Yeah...uh...just...fi..." Tyler meekly got out before he passed out from blood loss.

"Someone call 911!" Screamed Gwen in panic. Billy the janitor rushed over, then picked up Tyler, and put a towel on his nose to stop the bleeding. So...someone called 911, and Tyler was rushed to the local hospital. The bell rang after Tyler was evacuated, and the students slowly went to their classes. Ezekiel went to his first hour class, which was health where he sat to Cody's direct right.

"I feel so bad about what happened," Ezekiel confided to Cody.

"Wait what happened?" indifferently asked Cody. Ezekiel remembered that Cody wasn't there when it happened.

"Oh...um...nothing," Ezekiel covered up.

"Okay," replied Cody. Mr. Hatchet came over, and told them to end their discussion, as they still had to take their final exam. As Ezekiel took his exam, he could not concentrate. He kept thinking about Tyler, and what happened this morning.

"I'm pretty sure I failed this exam," Ezekiel told Mr. Hatchet as he handed him his partially completed final exam. Mr. Hatchet raised his eyebrow quizzically at this, but besides that ignored his comment.

The bell rang, and Ezekiel slumped along and shuffled his feet into next class, which was Canadian history. He sat to left of Noah in Canadian history, and asked him the same question as Cody.

"It was pretty bad," replied Noah.

"Yeah, I can't believe Tyler got injured like that," responded Ezekiel.

"Wait, you were talking about that? I thought you were talking about having to tell you happy first summer," Noah sarcastically said. Hearing this, Ezekiel got very depressed, and looked at the floor by his feet.

"I was just kidding," Noah added.

"That wasn't very kind, jerk," inserted the class president AKA Courtney. Noah glared at her and she glared back at him.

Mr. Phil, the teacher of Canadian history, told the class that today was a free day, and most of the teens in the rooms became excited at the surprise, except Courtney, Ezekiel, and Noah. The class passed very slowly for Ezekiel, as he couldn't stop thinking about what happened earlier that morning. By the time the bell rang Ezekiel was on the verge of crying.

The final "class" of the day was...lunch, and Ezekiel sat all by himself with his head down in his food crying into it, unable to look up.

"Hey, what's wrong?" A girl in a blue sweater came over, and sat next to Ezekiel. Ezekiel lifter his head out of his food, and looked at her. He recognized her almost immedietly. Her name was Bridgette, and he used to be infatuated deeply with her in the beginning of the year.

"Um...you have a little bit of jerky on your face," Bridgette said awkwardly. Ezekiel's face became as red as a tomato as he wiped the jerky off his face, and back onto his plate.

"Sorry about that...but my friend got injured by me, and had to be rushed off to the hospital this morning," explained Ezekiel.

"That was you? That's terrible!" sympathetically said Bridgette. Directly after she said this, Tyler walked into the room.

"Tyler?" asked Ezekiel.

"Yeah, I was only there for two hours, and they had to replace my nose with a fake one, but it went over fairly easy," Tyler explained.

"It looks good, and it's good to see you back on track," happily stated Ezekiel. Lindsay waved at Tyler, and blew him a kiss.

"Well I'm glad it worked out for you two," Bridgette said gently as she walked away. Tyler left to go sit next to Lindsay.

"Wait...don't go yet, Bridgette," Ezekiel kindly gestured.

"Why?" asked Bridgette.

"Will...you go out with me?" asked Ezekiel romantically. An awkward silence proceeded. Bridgette and Ezekiel's faces both became very red.

"Um...sorry...but I already have a boyfriend, sorry," replied Bridgette before she walked away. Ezekiel felt heartbroken after this, and afterwards he said goodbye to all of his friends, and loaded the bus to go home, promising himself that he will get Bridgette to love him.

The End!

Tcf09's Story
Awwww Crap... im so so so so so x100,000,000,000 sorry, last week (the 6th - the 10th) i had my Washington D.C. trip and saturday i had to go to a birthday party and i stayed all day and today my sister had a volleyball tournament... if i get eliminated i understand though...

Oweguy's Story
Best Summer Ever

Jason's Story
"Welcome parents, students and teachers alike." A man's voice was amplified over the loud speaker. As everyone walked in and took thier seats, the graduation ceramony started. The audience members rambled to the person left and right of them, as parent's usually do when they see some one they haven't seen in awhile.

"Sh!" The man put his finger over his lips, symbolizing to quiet down. The audience members gradually stopped talking.

"I, Rodney Jenkins, am certainly proud to say that this class of 2010 is one of the most intellectual graduatee's Hopper High School has ever had. Please give them a round of applause." After he said that, the entire audience clapped.

Meanwhile, to the left of the bleachers, where the viewers watching, all of the twenty-four former-camper-castmates were sitting.

"How do you do a round applause?" Lindsay leaned to the right of her to ask Sierra.

"Oh, like this!" Sierra started clapping, then rotating her hands clockwise.

"Ooooh!" Lindsay finally understood the concept of it. Beth, to the left of Lindsay, told Lindsay that she was doing it wrong, then demostrated it for Lindsay.

(TBC)

Webly's Story
Tough Decisions, Tough Decisions!

It was Duncan’s last day of 12th grade; he’d finally move on with his life and get a degree. He wasn’t going the college, he was going to stay here and party on with his life. He had thoughts of getting a job but he didn’t feel like it at the time.

Even though it was his last day of school, the last day of trying not to slack off. How could he not slack off and make it the best school day ever or at least for him.

Unlike, some high-schoolers last day, Pineridge’s was different. They would have a graduation ceremony a day later and not call it an actual school today. Duncan was excited he didn’t have anything to worry about besides Mr. Vandenvet’s big end of the year test.

Mr. Vandenvet was having a so called “surprise” end of the year test, reviewing everything they learned the whole year. The problem about it was it wasn’t a secret. Everyone knew about as that was the teacher’s topic of his conversations on his phone all week. He told them not to listen in as it was an important call but how can someone not listen in. One year someone accidentally spoke about the end of the year test in his class before it came and he got so mad he was suspended for the last day and got a zero on the test. No one would actually get suspension like that but Mr. Vandenvet had his ways. As a matter of fact, no one actually knows how the poor kid got suspended for that reason but rumor has it, Mr. Vandenvet threatened the principal.

Although, how awful of a teacher Mr. Vandenvet is and all the sick rumors. Duncan didn’t care and thought it was amusing. Mr. Vandenvet hates Duncan so much. Everyone knows it’s only for one reason; Duncan is the only person that has ever stood up to Mr. Vandenvet and got away with it.

Duncan tried to keep of his mind about the complicated test for now and started to think about his mischievous thing he was going to do, later that day.

Pineridge High School started at 6:45 each morning and ended at 2:09. On the last day of school, Duncan got off to a rough start by sleeping too late! By the time he woke up he saw it was 6:30.

Although Duncan had to hurry, he didn’t mind. It was just another school day or to him at least.

“Honey, what took you long upstairs?” Duncan’s mom quickly asked as Duncan runs down the stairs while grabbing his lunch.

“No time to explain and remember what I told you about calling me honey. I’m 18 and I’ve been to juvi you hurt my reputation by even talking to me, let alone call me honey.” Duncan replies.

“Whatever, sweetie,” Duncan’s mom says rolling her eyes.

Duncan walks out the door acting cool with his backpack on his back. He tried to look tough so he gave the bus driver and a couple of nerds some looks that scared them to death.

After that, Duncan walked on the butterscotch school bus with a smile.

Duncan walked down the long isle and took a seat in the back by his best bud, Yahoo.

“Hey Duncan, ready to make the best day of school the worst day ever for everyone else,” Yahoo asks.

“You know me so well,” Duncan replies with an evil grin.

By the time the golden butterscotch bus got to the school Duncan had explained his impish plan to Yahoo.

And by the time Duncan and Yahoo got out it was commencing time.

Yahoo laid out the plan in an abandoned homeroom the school was going to re-model next year. Duncan felt this plan was so important he skipped homeroom and hired 2 nerds to act like them for the mini-class. It only cost 10 dollars and Duncan made an excuse not to be the one to pay so Yahoo did.

“In first hour, you sneak out into the hallway with me during Spanish and then pull the fire alarm as I run to the abandoned homeroom. After the evacuation, I will run into Mr. Vandenvet’s room and take the answer sheet to the “surprise” end of the year test and then copy it with the copying machine in the room nearby and put the test back. As the teachers are taking count of the people, stall the teacher as I run back out at the end of the line. If something happens, say he went home sick before it happened because Mrs. Diputs never takes the attendance until the end of class. During science, Mr. Vandenvet won’t notice we took the answer sheet and I’ll make you a copy too as I forgot to say.” Duncan explains.

“This is great and for the first time I paid attention and I haven’t had any questions,” Yahoo says almost wrapping up the conversation.

“Well, it was the second time I explained it to you. It should’ve been easy to listen. Anyways, let the games begin!”

Duncan walked to first hour with pride and determined to fulfill his job.

“Hola, Duncan!” Mrs. Diputs says as Duncan enters the class. “Okay, I think everyone is here so let’s get on with our next lesson today, how to conjugate “er” verbs in Spanish.”

As Ms. Diputs is explaining Duncan and Yahoo sneak out off class. They both start running opposite directions on schedule.

The fire alarm rang at the knick of time when Duncan ran in the vacant homeroom.

Now, most schools would have a fire plan and Pineridge did but did they know when they were pulling the alarm, not an idea. All the teachers never see it coming and most just go with the flow. They never expected it was real. Last day of school, probably a remembrance of what we did this year, the teachers thought.

Duncan looked out the crummy door of the unoccupied homeroom and saw people exiting.

“I’m so smart, this plan is going to work and I’m almost halfway there,” Duncan thought to himself.

Most schools would have a time limit to how long the bell would go off. Pineridge didn’t. The average time it turns off is around 16 minutes, so Duncan had more than enough time.

After the evacuation, Duncan tip-toed while making his way to Mr. Vandenvet’s room because you never know what teachers are still going to be in the school past the evacuation.

Duncan walked into the quiet room. Mr. Vandenvet didn’t have class first hour so it was harder to find the answer sheet. He finally found it deep inside a thick wooden drawer. He pulled the sheet out and then carefully slid the drawer back in not to make any noise.

2/3 out of the room, Duncan heard a crunching sound and then again.

“Oh, no, a teachers coming,” Duncan murmurs to himself. He started to panic and then he ran into Mr. Vandenvet’s room. Only because it was the last choice he had and he wasn’t going to get caught, especially, after getting this close.

He stood by maroon painted wall by a bookshelf filled with worthless junk about Apocalypse and Science. Now he understood part of the why the weird teacher was so insane.

The footsteps got closer and closer and then the light turned on. It was Mr. Vandenvet. He tried to find a speaker in his room and then Duncan remembered. Mr. Vandenvet was the one who checks the school after the teachers figure out it was not planned. Duncan was about to smack his forehead but remembered to keep still.

Before Mr. Vandenvet could tell the entire student body about how the fire wasn’t a drill but there wasn’t any fire, he squealed and pointed at Duncan.

“Why are you in here?” He asked smirking.

Duncan stood there and thought of an excuse, “Okay, I’ve always had a fear of fire. I panicked and I ran into here thinking it was safe. And then I thought it over and I almost overcome but when you came in here I decided not to move just so I would have more of a chance not to speak of this with you or any other teacher that was coming in here.” Duncan may be dumb but he sure is a quick liar.

Mr. Vandenvet decided to let him go and the rest of Duncan’s day went fine. His last class was Science. The teacher was impressed at Duncan's score, so he called him to his desk.

“I think it’s really great that you’ve been paying attention in my class this year. But I have to tell you something. It’s that you’re going to have to fail this grade or take summer school and another special class such as Sylvan or Kumon to exceed with life.” Mr. Vandenvet explained.

“Really? All year I’ve been leading up to this, I figured I’d take summer school but an extra class why does this have to be so tough.” Duncan stared at the clock and then saw everyone in the class staring at him back.

“You have by the end of class to make your decision,”

He sat in his seat and tried to hide from everyone. Duncan was furious, angry and all the other words that clarify MAD!

At the end of class he made his choice and slowly walked back up to the teacher’s desk where he was exactly 10 minutes ago.

“I’ll do the summer school and an extra class thing, sure it may be hard. But it’s better than staying at school for a whole another year.”

Although Duncan was angry he managed to contain himself.

On the school bus he was talking to yahoo, “Rough day, huh. I managed to stall the whole time until Mr. Vandenvet said to come back in.”

“All I can say is it was full of tough decisions,”

Judging
Nalyd: Shane has Gophers, Chimmy has Bass.

Shane's Reviews
Reddy - No story, no review

Mrodd - Alright...this was pretty good. However, you forgot some quotation marks. Also, the story was a little confusing, and you capitalized some things that shouldn't have been capitalized. Over all, okay entry.

Jessica - No story, no review.

Codaa5 - No story, no review

IHeart - No story, no review, makes my job easier.

Josie Amber - Well, this was a sweet story. This is, this story was pretty good! You missed a few places where commas should have been and your spacing was off a few times, but this was a great entry, never the less. Great job!

Sonictksb - This was not a finished story, and there were a few mistakes. Firstly, whenever you abbreviate something, you have to put a period after it. Anyway, spacing was off a few times. Periods should always come BEFORE the quotation mask. Also, always spell numbers, not use the symbol. Anyway, weak entry at best.

Chimmy's Reviews
Usitgz: This was a great story! I’m a little confused as to everyone’s age, (As you never specified what grade it was.) but other than that I’m utterly impressed with your work. I didn’t notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, so great job!

Spenny: No story, no review. 

Tcf09: No story, no review, but thank you for providing a reason.

Oweguy: Interesting title, but no story, no review.

Jason: For that little blurb, it was awesome. Everyone was in character…but I only wished you had finished.

Webly: I’m not so sure Duncan was in character the whole time, and I have no clue who names their child Yahoo, but other than that it was good. You were missing a comma or two, and there were some grammar mistakes, though.

Elimination Ceremony Three
Nalyd: Bass lose. Usitgz, nominate two people please. Actually.... I will be nominating. I know who I want to hear from Tcf09, Oweguy, please tell us why you should stay.

Usitgz: Thanks for choosing me as BOW, but I still wish I could choose, because I would have chosen Ben, and Oweguy.

Nalyd: Woops, didn't see Ben. Chimmy didn't judge him. Very well, Ben and Oweguy, why should you stay?

Ben:I think I should stay cause well during this whole week my computer was messed up very bad I was trying to touch up my story til I new it was right and I couldn't

Oweguy: Sorry I haven't posted any stories in the past two weeks but I've been busy on the fanfic wiki. I'm sure I'll be here the next challenge but I need to here what Tcf09 has to say first.

(Webly: It's Ben not Tcf09)

(Ben:Hey OWE wasup! Havn't seen you in forever)

TBTDIF: Hi guys. I know I'm not nominated, but I'd like to say my reason for not having a story up. I was away making a film this weekend. That's pretty much it. XD

Tcf09: Wait do I have to state my reason to???

Nalyd: The person eliminated is... Ben. I'm sorry, Ben. I hope you continue writing.

Week Four Chat
Nalyd: Next Sunday we'll resume challenges.

Oweguy: Well I got another chance. I'm definetly going to do this weeks challenge.

(Sunshine: ...I had an epic mind blank over last weekend and forgot to come help with this... *headkeyboard* So sorry, guys... I meant to apologize earlier but I was super busy all week. This week I don't have anything going on, though, so here I am! Again, so sorry!!!)

(Chimmy: It's OK, Sunny, we're just glad you're back :D)

(Sunshine: Yay! ^^ I promise I'll help out this week... is it still sunday challenge, thursday judging, etc?)

Nalyd: *hands Sunshine the keys to her office* You're officially the only person other than me to have an office. :D

Reddy:*walks into Nalyd's office* :P