Total Drama Author 4

A lot of people think that they are great authors. Over half of these people are mediocre. This is not only a camp where people are getting their writing skills improved but they are competing to be the best author.... Who will prove that they have the skills? Who will crumble under the pressure? Who will rise to the occasion?

'''This... is... TOTAL! DRAMA! AUTHOR! 4!!!'''

How It Works

 * 1) Two teams of nine people each will be constructed.
 * 2) The teams will compete in challenges. (i.e. Write a story where Lindsay and Tyler break up OR write a story where Beth suddenly becomes popular OR write a story about the contest itself.)
 * 3) Sunshine and Chimmy will read and judge the stories, and determine which team wins.
 * 4) The winning team is invincible!
 * 5) Sunshine/Chimmy (Whoever judged the losing team) will pick whoever was the best author on the team that week.
 * 6) The best person on the losing team will pick two of their teammates to be up for elimination.
 * 7) The bottom two will give reasons to stay in the game.
 * 8) Nalyd will determine who goes home (The only guarantee that one is safe is if they're on the winning team, or they win an individual challenge).
 * 9) Repeat the above steps.
 * 10) Later in the game, there will be a merge, and the two teams will become the Best-Sellers.
 * 11) More challenges, stories, elimination.
 * 12) One author will be left and will be declared the best author ever!!

Contestants
This season eighteen contestants will compete. It is requested that people provide an avatar of themselves on the talk page. The first challenge will be up next Sunday. Sign-ups are closed!

Writing Gophers

 * 1) COKEMAN11 (PWNAGE)
 * 2) Darkdonpatch (I am here to improve my writing skills)
 * 3) KoopaKidJr.- Time to put my writing skills to the test!
 * 4) Turnertang- Ready to get fourth place again!
 * 5) Weblykinly (i expect to get pass the first couple of eliminations then fail, this is going to be fun!)

Typing Bass

 * DJ Spenstar
 * 1) Jason. -My first time!
 * Shane - I want to show you all that I can write!
 * Tdafan123-I`ve improved my writing, so I`m ready

Eliminated

 * Anonymos- I've made my decision! I'm competing, so ya'll better watch out, cause nobody's going to stand in my way this time
 * Ezekielguy-Bring...it.
 * Tdifan1234-Maybe I'll get farther in this season than last.... XD
 * Benthegame-Finally in. I'm goin all the way!
 * 1) Cards777- I did good last season!!!
 * 2) Kenzen - Bring it on, Wait is that a bull dont bring it on ahh*runs away from the bull*
 * 3) YoshiPerson (This should be fun! I love writing! All I need is the time to do it... (XD)
 * 4) NIzzy (NIzzy is back! XD)
 * 5) GM -(Hopefully I can win adminship)
 * 6) Tyedye Oh my god! I'm on a TDAuthor! Expect me to fail! (Also expect occasional British English spelling, Britain is just awesome like that XD)

Elimination Table
Color Code:

[User] = Writing Gopher

[User] = Typing Bass

WIN = Won that week's challenge

BOW = Was the best of the worst/nominator that week

SAFE = Was not eliminated that week

NOM = Was in nominated but was not eliminated

OUT = Was eliminated

N No story was submitted by this person this week.

I Incomplete story was submitted by this person this week.

1 Anonymos was on the winning team, but dropped out.

2 Kenzen was on the winning team, but dropped out.

Week One Chat
* scene opens up to an epic stadium*

Announcer:Welcome to...TOTAL! DRAMA! AUTHOR! 4! *contestants come out of opening in dome to thunderous applause, but the backdrops fall over, revealing a random mess hall, and Sunshine playing a track of applause*

Nalyd: ...I said a big, giant stadium, Chimmy! What did you do?

Chimmy:How would you spend 2 bucks?! (XD)

Nalyd: *brings everyone into a library* You will all be staying here in the library for the next give or take sixteen weeks! FOUR MONTHS OF WRITING! Have fun. *leaves and goes to office*

Anonymos: Fortunately for me, those four months won't be anywhere near the period of time when I have to leave for the annual three weeks.

GM: Well, hi!!

NIzzy: Hiya guys!

GM: Hi NIzzy!!! *goes around and greets himself to everyone* (XD)

Turnertang: I'm back everyone! (Does a handstand)

Chimmy:*hops in* Hey, guys! Hey, I actually recognize most of you this time! (XD)

Shane: Um, hi guys! *starts to read a book*

GM: Hey, Shane!!!

Cards: Hey guys!! I'm ready to write!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! I thought I should do that now! Chimmy, are we going to have to write around Christmas????

Shane: Hey GM! I can't wait to start this. Hopefully, it's not due today.

Dark:*a diffent bus comes in and Dark comes out with his staright jacket and black angel wings* um can someone get my things?

Koops: Oh. My. GOD!!!

Dark: WhaT?

NIzzy: O.o

Dark: Fine i am suppose to be a darker clone of this pixie named um Brightshine Pasta.

Cards: *points at Dark* HI!!!!!!!!! *releases Dark from straight jacket*

Chimmy:Sorry, guys, IDK when the challenge will be up! :(

Dark:Okay oh do you guys know any pixis here because i am suppose to be a clone of one it's called or close to Brightshine Pasta?

Chimmy:Oh, you mean Sunshine! ^^. Yeah, she's co-co-hosting! (XD)

Dark: Sunshine? hmmm no wonder i am the dark angel of here (Dark angel: born at the same time as the pixie is the copy of it but bears no relationship or DNA to each other but the same age as it and hair color(kinda).Did i just gave out the Dark Angel thing?

Chimmy:Yup! (XD)

Dark-Meh,I am already got out of Demon Angel Jail so i am loose out in this place luckily they cant catch me here.

Cards: I have a question Chimmy, on the rules when it says that the only guarantee that you are safe is if you win invincibility or if your team wins, but if you are the best author on the losing team, and you pick 2 authors to be put up for elimination, doesn't that mean that the best author on the losing team is safe too?

Tdafan:*arrives*Hey everyone!Great to be back!

NIzzy: Fan of TDA! Nice to see you!(XD FAIL)

Cards: HHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chimmy:IDK Cards, I don't really know how this thing works yet...but I assume you would be!

Tdafan:Well,hopefully I can get to the merge this season

Chimmy:Well, since I'm a host, I'm not supposed to be picking favorites, but...all of you have a great shot!

Tdafan:I can`t wait for the challenge!

Dark: I hope there is no Harold voting this season *what you think i dont live in the human world well i live in a apartment).

Tdafan:I just realized TBTDIF isn`t here.He should,he`s a great author

Cards: I thought he was signed up, but he missed sign-ups.

Tdafan:*high fives Cards*Whats up dude!Glad you could make it!

Dark: *trying to meditate but cant concentrate* UGH! I thought this was a library why is it so loud?

NIzzy: *pokes Dark* XD

Tdafan:I`m gonna go unpack*goes to wherever they stay*

Cards: *pokes Dark with NIzzy*

Tdafan:*pokes Dark*This is better than cable!(XD)

Cards: *pokes Dark with NIzzy* Let's play a game!! To play, you first state your username, and a made-up hobby!! I'll go first!! My username is Cards777, and my hobby is poking things with a stick!! (LOL XD!!!!!!) (Wizards of Waverly Place reference)

Tdafan:I`m Tdafan123 and I like to eat computers(LOL)

NIzzy: I'm NIzzy and I like visting mental hospitals. (XD)

GM: I'm GM and I like pie. (XD)

Tdafan:Ummm,now what?

NIzzy: EVA CLOUD! *runs away* (Good times XD)

GM: Let's state our username and say something we don't do.

Dark: I am Dark i Write in the Death Note *Grabs both TDAfan and NIzzy and thorws them*

Cards: I'm Cards777, and I don't jump off cliffs!! I don't push people off cliffs either! Or do I? (XD)

GM: I'm GM and I don't do anything. (XD)

NIzzy: I'm NIzzy and I don't do math homework XD

Shane: I'm Shane and I don't do buttons, I HATE buttons. IDK why but I just do.

Jason: I'm Jason and I get confused easily...wait, huh?

Tdafan:*goes into Nalyds office and does prank calls*Hello,you just won a million dollars*pause*No,this isn`t Tdafan123 this is...321nafadt(XD)*pause*No,I`m not interested in any Christmas ornaments,thank you(LOL)

Sunshine: *bursts out of Nalyd's epic office* FINALLY!!! I've been locked in there since the end of last season!!! (XD)

Dark: Your Sunshine *bursts out laughinh* Your the pixie that i am suppose to be the Demon Angel *Laughs*

Sunshine: OMG DEMON ANGEL THINGY!!! *pokes him/her repeatedly* (IDK, sorry XD)

Dark: ugh your more annoying then i thought and besides do you even know what Dark Angels are there clones of pixie

Tdafan:I made the best prank call!

Chimmy:DUN. DUN. DUUUNNNN! (XD couldn't resist)

Dark: I thought thiws was a libary (WHEN IS THIS GOING TO STAR)

Sunshine: *to Dark* YOU'RE SO ADORABLE!!! *pinches cheeks XD* I'm gonna call you Iggy!!! (First challenge starts tomorrow.)

Dark: ugh well at least your not and Punk/Emo/Goth fangirl

Tdafan:*spray paints on Nalyds wall 'YoshiPerson Wuz Her'*

Sunshine: Speaking of Punk/Emo/Goth fangirl-ness, Chimmy, is Shadii-kun here???

Turnertang: Who's Shadii-kun?

Tdafan:(CONF)This is my season! I am way better than i was last season,I got this

Anonymos: Shadow, of course! Silly, Turnertang!

Sunshine: *pokes pic*

Tdafan:*shakes Nonnys hand*Hey,so sorry you lost last season(I regret mentioning that XD)

Dark: (rules if an Dark angel and Pixie clones meet:The dark angel cant harm the Pixie and the pixie can use the Dark Angel -_-)

Nalyd: Listen up, everyone! Stay out of my office, or you're ELIMINATED. Anyway, ready for... the first challenge?

Tdafan:I`m...ready*gulps*(XD)

CK11: Bring...it...on. *smirks*

Sunshine: *Spongebob voice* I'm ready! I'm ready! Oh, wait, I'm a host...

Chimmy:Ya, Shadow IS here! He's in my room! ^^

GM: I'm working on my story. I'm on the third page! (XD)

Chimmy:*jaw drops*

Shane: My first challenge! I'm so excited! I'll work on it now. I hope my story will be okay.

Jason: Hey NIzzy. Whats up?

CK11: 2nd story! YES! (XD)

Chimmy:*o.o's at the image names XD*

Kenzen:I am very nervous

Shane: FINALLY DONE! I hope it's good.

Jason: It's funny how were all doing it tonight, when it's due by thursday.

Dark: I might fix mine but meh.

Kenzen:Hows mine

Chimmy:*does her best not to get involve, but is still failing XD*

YP: Hey, guys! I love writing! I can't wait to get into this camp!

Ezekielguy: How do you guys like mine so far?

Tdafan:Mine`s done!

GM: Mine's done it'll be posted tomorrow my 7 page story.

Tdafan:*watches a movie*

Weblykinly: Hey, sorry I'm late but I'm here.

CK11: *notices the absence of Nonny's story* He's probably writing it.

Cards: Well, it's only Sunday, and it's due Thursday. I'm gonna finish my story tomorrow, that is if I don't have a lot of homework!

CK11: I just write the story the day it is assigned to prevent homework from getting in the way.

Cards: I'm trying to get my stories finished as soon as possible, because last season, I waited til' the last day or two until it was due, and I missed 3 stories last season, and that's what got me eliminated.

CK11 (conf): At the beginning of last season, I counted Chimmy and Cards out. Mostly Cards because I saw Chimmy write. I still counted Cards out, but then he placed sixth. He's a good author overall. That means he'll be tough to beat.

CK11: Same, but I only missed one.

Cards: *goes to finish story*

NIzzy: I usually finish my homework as soon as I get it, so I can spend more time writing my story over a couple of days. :D

GM: My masterpiece is.... uhh *looks at it to choose* (XD)

Tdafan:I personally think my story this week is better than both my stories last season

CK11: Both your stories? *remembers when Tdafan technically saved him from elimination* Oh, yeah... Agreement on that.

Tye: Wow, only 3 people haven't started their stories... and I'm one of them... I feel so special! =D (XD, I have started, but it's just not up here 'cuz I'm actually writing it.)

Tdafan:I can`t wait for results!

NIzzy: Me too. *hi-5's Tdafan*

GM: The results should be soon.

Tdafan:*eats some chips*I`m bored

Dark: Hey TDAFAN theres a bazooka in the hosts lounge

Dark:*concam* I thing i just sent a devil for a bomb

Cards: I'm finished!

GM: (CONF) I hope my team wins.

Dark (CONF): eats a PB and J

Cards: (CONF) I hope the Gophers win! Sorry Bass, but I'm cheering for my team. Last season, my team lost the first challenge, so this season, maybe my team can win the first challenge!

Tdafan:I can tell it`s gonna be a close decision

NIzzy: *nods*

Chimmy:I think I already know which team's losing, but I can't be certain.

Shane: (CONF) I really hope I don't go first. I'll be happy if my story gets a moderate review, though.

Cards: I already know which team is going to win!!!! It's the [put team name here]!!!

Shane: (CONF) I hope we can we please hurry this up. The suspense is killing me! Also, I want to know the results tonight so I can write tommorow. I'm traveling tommorow and I won't be able to go online much, let alone, type for the compitition. *looks around* Now that I think about it, what's the point of a confessional? Everyone's gonna see it anyway.

Shane: Sorry if I'm being rude. I'm so nervous. AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! *runs in circles*

CK11: *runs up to Nalyd's office but rembers remark* Oh, yeah. *gets caught by booby trap* AAGH! A BOOBY TRAP!

Harold (CONF): *somehow in confessional* He said Boobies!

Producer: Wrong tape! Darn it! (XD)

Tdafan:*waits for results*

Tye: Hey! No waiting for results until I'm done with my story! (XD)

Dark:Tye it's fair because you will get an extra day or something because tomorrow is the results.

Tye: I have another couple of hours. I do my best writing after everyone in my house is asleep, anyways. I don't really know why. (XD)

Anonymos: I don't think the Typing Bass need to nominate anyone, as I am dropping out of the contest. The only reason I joined was so that I could win and prove to myself that I am actually a top author. I realize now that I already am, and don't need the title to prove it. And besides, with me in the running, I don't think I would've given the new contestants a fair chance. So, to the other authors, I wish you good luck; you'll need it in this contest.

Tye: *jaw drops*

Anonymos: I figured I'd get a reaction or two like that...

Tye: You don't need to quit! At least stay in a week or two! (XD)

Anonymos: *Shrugs.* I think I made the right decision.

Shane: No you didn't. I want to compete against you. Please don't leave.

Tye: See? No one wants you to leave. Stay in the competition and have fun writing, please?

Chimmy:*sighs* If that's what you want, Nonny...*mutters under breath* There goes my bet with my friend...(XD JK)

Anonymos: (Sighs.) No, I think I should go.

Nalyd: Guys, follow me.

Dark: Well then looks like I have to step it up if i want to say and I didn't know (well then I will have to make it better).

Tdafan:Nonny,don't leave!You deserve it more than me I'll tell you what

NIzzy: Nonny don't leave! :'(

Challenge One
Okay, since this is a new season, your first challenge is to write a new season premier! We've done new Total Drama Island premiers, but this week you need to write a new Total Drama Action premier! It needs to include all fourteen of the original competitors in season two. You can do any movie genre, any prize, any elimination, as long as it makes sense. You will be judged on creativity, originality, spelling, grammar, and how in-character the characters act. (Since the season one finale, not after all of the stuff in season two, so DJ doesn't have an alliance with Chef, Gwen and Trent are still dating, Harold isn't truly epic yet, etc.) The stories are due Thursday. Sunshine will judge the Gophers, Chimmy will judge the Bass.

Judging
Nalyd: This week, I will judge the Gophers, and Chimmy will judge the Bass. Judging will be done like last season (Not the score out of ten system.) Sunshine, Chimmy, you don't have to have all the reviews done at once, you could post one or two at a time if you want.

Chimmy's Reviews (Bass)

 * Benthegame:This story was funny in parts. For instance, I absolutely LOVED when Leshawna slapped Heather. However, PLEASE don’t use script format from now on. There were some grammar mistakes as well.
 * Ezekielguy:This story was hilarious! The random Alaskan bald man made me LOL, though it did seem a bit of a side-trip to the actual story. Poor Duncan! Unfortunatly, that’s all I have to say about it. You didn’t complete your story.
 * Jason:This story was pretty cool! Izzy was crazy, Lindsay was dumb, and everyone else seemed to be in character. Katie coming back really surprised me! However, you had some grammar mistakes. You shouldn’t put more than one individual talking in the same paragraph, which you did many times.
 * Kenzen:This was awesome! I absolutely loved everything Lindsay said, and Duncan was as awesome as ever. However, you had a ton of grammer issues. The beginnings of sentences weren’t capitalized, people spoke more than once in a paragraph, and so on and so on.
 * NIzzy:This story was really nice! Izzy smashing her guitar on Heather’s head was too funny! However, I’m subtracting points for eliminating Duncan. XD. JK, BTW, but I did notice that you forgot some commas in places.
 * Shane:This is just an awesome story, though I thought you were calling Harold a nerd-ette for a while XD. You gave me a new nickname for Owen, made me laugh at Lindsay and Beth, and I practically died of laughter at the Ezekiel reference. It’s funny at the rendezvous part, because I always joke with my friends about how it’s spelled. The macaroni part connects to my life as well. However, you were missing some commas, and I think you had some spelling mistakes too, ironically.
 * Tdafan: This is an OK story, but….you still had a lot of grammar mistakes. The commas seemed to be everywhere, the beginnings of sentences weren’t capitalized, and all in all, the story seemed a bit short.
 * Tdifan: From what I can see, it was a funny and good story....just not complete.
 * Tyedye: First of all, let me make something clear: I’m pretty sure you amazed us all by finishing your story at 12:30 in the morning. Duncan’s line about cars made me LOL, and I loved the Survivor reference. I personally liked the new voting system better than the old one. You had some slight grammar and spelling mistake, but that is inevitable when rushing.

Nalyd's Reviews (Gophers)

 * Anonymos - The story started off really great, all the characters being used very well! However, the silent movie, while a unique choice, hurt the story as it really didn't have much potential. The challenge didn't ruin the story, but I don't know how much it really helped you... The story got better near the end, but I think it ended kind of weakly. Overall, everyone stayed in character which is awesome, very original, great grammar, and spelling, and this story was a pleasure to read.
 * Cards777 - The beginning was a lot like the real series, specifically Justin, Beth, and Trent. I liked Lindsay missing Tyler, though. I like the challenge idea. The snowball challenge was a great idea. I wish you'd made up Christmas carols instead of existing ones, but it's fine - This isn't Total Drama Carols. The story was original and creative, but their were problems with spelling and grammar.
 * COKEMAN11 - I liked the recap, very funny! Everything before the theme song was great! A girl named Matt... Awesome! The rest of the chapter's content was great, but the ending seemed a little rushed. I think that if you added some content to it, this story would be one of the best this week.
 * Darkdonpatch - Script stories are not allowed in Total Drama Author, however since I forgot to put that in the challenge, I can't deduct for it... The grammar wasn't very good and neither was spelling.
 * GM - The plot to this was quite original and creative. I think everyone was in character. Not many notable grammar or spelling problems.
 * KoopaKidJr. - This story started out without the introduction, and I think you needed one. The rest of the story had the characters very in character. I knew you'd be good at standard format instead of script. Very creative and original. But the ending seemed rushed, as the elimination happened right at the end of the challenge.
 * Turnertang - The grammar error you usually have is ending a quote with a period. The story seemed too short and rushed to be finished. I hope you work on grammar and completeness of the story for next time.
 * Weblykinly - Script stories are not allowed in Total Drama Author, however since I forgot to put that in the challenge, I can't deduct for it... There were grammar problems throughout.
 * YoshiPerson - Don't worry about indenting, it isn't necessary. The challenge was very well written, and very creative and very original and I really like it! Well done!

And the Winner is...
Nalyd: Chimmy and Sunshine, who do you think should be the winning team?

Chimmy:I think the Gophers!

Nalyd: I agree, so the Gophers win! (I'd wait for Sunshine, but I don't think she's on...) The best of the worst is... Tyedye! Well done Tyedye, I'll let you and the Bass talk for a while and decide who to nominate.

Tdafan:*is scared*Don`t nominate me

Shane: I'm a tad scared too.

Tye: Alrighty, Bass, let's do this quick, simple, and in a TDI manner. Vote for one person you think should be in the bottom two, and then the two people with the most votes will be my choice. My vote goes for Tdifan. Sorry, but you didn't finish your story.

Shane: Sorry, but my vote goes to Zeke. You didn't complete your story dude. I'm very sorry.

Jason: Zeke.

Tdafan:*sighs*This is hard but Zeke(CONF)It was hard to vote for one of my closest friends

Elimination Ceremony One
The Bass: *walk into the main room of the library and line up in front of Nalyd*

Nalyd: Okay... Tyedye, first nominee and why. (Nonny's quit is not official until the elimination ceremony)

(CONF)Kenzen:I admit i was scared I thought I was a meh author but if i go first i will admit i will be sad but i will admit i thought i did good with my story this week

Tye: Tdifan. She didn't complete her story.

Nalyd: Second nominee and why, please.

Tye: Zeke, he also had an unfinished story.

Nalyd: Okay... Tdifan, Zeke, step forward... Now, Tdifan, why do you deserve to stay?

Tdifan: I think I deserve to stay because even though I don't have much time to finish stories, I still love writing and this competition has improved my writing so much! Take a look at my first couple stories on the first season, and then look at my (fraction of a) story here. Which one's better? XD Seriously. You can see how much I've improved. Also, being the runner-up of the first season and making it to the final 5 in the second season, I might have a shot at getting far this season, too. I'd really like to make it farther than last season (XD That was a fail last season), but if I don't I'll accept it and move on. *takes a bow*

Nalyd: Tdifan, I can't count previous seasons in determining things... Zeke, why do you deserve to stay?

(Kenzen:So everyone else is safe)

(Nalyd: Unless I think somebody else should have gone...)

Zeke: Well, this may not change much...But I had the whole story written down on a pad of paper. I just never had enough time to get it all down. I had schoolwork, family events, blah blah blah.

Nalyd: Thank you... *pull out cell phone* Nonny, get down to the main room, I need to talk to you immediately.

Anonymos: (Bursts in.) Sorry, I'm late.

Nalyd: Nonny... Do you want to stay and compete, or walk out the door there. *Points to door*

Anonymos: I feel it would be best for me to go, but all of my competition urges me to go on competing, I have decided to... go. Sorry to all who wanted me to stay, but I feel that this is the right thing to do.

Nalyd: Well, who am I to stop you? Good-bye, Nonny. You're a good author. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Anonymos: Bus? Oh, no, I don't take the bus. (Gets dragged onto the bus.) Evidently I do... Bye, all!!

Nalyd: Tdifan, Zeke, you're safe... for now...

Week Two Chat
Nalyd: Challenge soon.

NIzzy: Last time on-! Wait I'm not the host... (XD)

Koops: Priceless NIzzy! Priceless!!!

NIzzy: *backs away from Koops*

Chimmy:I can't believe Nonny's gone, but oh well! Good luck to the rest of you!

Weblykinly: After what happened yesterday, I really need to try harder and be as careful as I can.

Koops: I can't believe we lost Nonny, and we won!!!

NIzzy: *sigh* ...

Jason: I'm nervous about the next challenge.

NIzzy: Yeah...

GM: NONNY IS GONE!!!

NIzzy: ...

Dark: Whats wrong Nizzy?

YP: We won, and yet lost a player... Ironic, isn't it? Let's win, Gophers!!!!!

Dark: I know YP now I think we are the Screaming Gaffers now

Shane: May we please push the date back until Friday or Saturda? I won't be able to get my story up until then. I understand if you can't, though.

CK11: Done. It's a continuation of a story Sprink describes as "very sweet." I'm thinking of putting the original up on the fanfic wiki as a one-shot. ... *goes to do so*

Tdafan:*sighs*I can't believe Nonny quit,he probably would've won this time

CK11: Yeah, and I'd get 2nd, 3rd, or 4th. Wait, no, save fourth for Turnertang. He's gotten it every time he's competed. So I'd get 2nd, 3rd, or possibly 5th if Nonny didn't quit. But I'm not suggesting I'll win...or am I? (XD)

Tdafan:I know I won't win,but as long as I get to the merge,I'll be fine

Cards: I don't know what I'll place this season, as long as I get my stories finished, I might do better than last season. Speaking of finishing my story, *starts story*

Kenzen:Can we add a character to it if so like make me Izzy's Husband in the story

CK11: Husband? O.O Anyway, who likes my story?

Tdafan:Haven't read it,Check out mine please

CK11: It's funny.

Tdafan:Mine?Anyway,yours was good.I liked it.LOL his secret gaming clan

CK11: Yeah, yours is funny. I almost forgot to put that in but then I remembered his TDI Interactive Bio...

Kenzen:My story is five years later

CK11: Ah...

Kenzen: And my story is a drama

Shane: I'm finally done with mine! And I was on time!

Cards: Finished! I'm bored! What do we do now? Blah, blah, blah. Pudding! Blah, blah blah. Library. *goes insane* I forgot, Bye Nonny, you were a great author!

Challenge Two
This week you need to write about a TDI character's holiday break! They can celebrate Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanza, New Year's, or Boxing Day! The stories will be judged on grammar, spelling, and creativity! We ask that you do not do a parody of a holiday story. Script stories are strictly prohibited. Stories are due Thursday!

Nalyd's Announcement
Nalyd: Due to lack of reviews, the winners were decided on which team had the most stories missing. The Gophers have 2 missing stories, while the Bass have 3. The Bass lose. You guys can talk in this section to decide which two will be nominated. I suggest you all submit two votes, and whichever two people get the most votes go up. (Just a thought XD)

Tdafan:Zekey and Ben,sorry guys :/

Kenzen:I vote Zekey and Ben Sorry guys (Tdifan is a great author ind i am giving her a chance)

Jason: Zeke and Ben.

(Sunshine: I was just about to finish my reviews. XD Sorry, guys...)

(Chimmy:Ditto with Sunshine XD)

(Kenzen:Put them up still PLEASE)

(Weblykinly:Me too, I want to know what to be improving on)

(Dark:still put them up because most people want to see their results)

Tye: Aww... no Best of the Worst? (XD) Anyways... Ben and...umm... Zeke. Although I dislike following a crowd, it is in my best decision to vote with everyone else. That, and if I vote someone else it won't count because there are already enough votes against Ben and Zeke. (XD)

(Nalyd: Sunshine, Chimmy, next time post the story reviews one at a time instead of all at once, k?)

Elimination Ceremony Two
Typing Bass: *arrive*

Nalyd: Um... *randomly picks somebody* Kenzen, who did your team pick and why? (Both nominees)

Kenzen:*stands up on stage sweating *Umm..*Spotlight flashes on him* Um The Team picked Zeke and Ben we felt that Tdifan deserved a chance and the Zeke and Ben were the best choices That is all*meets team*Good luck you two

Nalyd: So... you picked them because they're the best choices... not much of a reason but okay. *Zeke and Ben step forward* Zeke, why do you deserve to stay?

Kenzen:No i couldn't think okay geez

Zeke: I have NO reason. You should just get on with it and boot me out. I just wasn't cut out to do this because of school and stuff.

Nalyd: Zeke, I agree, and it's your time to go. Remember, whenever I've read your stories where you put lots of effort, I've been amazed and impressed. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Week Three Chat
Nalyd: *goes into office*

Dark: Pressure is now getting to everyone!

Chimmy:*sneaks into Nalyd's office, pops up behind him* Hey, Nalyd! I've got the challenge idea!

Dark: *Is sitting on the bench right by Nayld's office*

Sunshine: *starts singing* Everybody sing, like it's the last time you will ever sing... tell me, tell me, can you feel the pressure now... (That was "Born For This" by Paramore. Thank you, thank you, I'll be here all week. XD)

GM: *walks away and gets a pop-tart* MMMM.....strawberry....(XD)

Dark: Hey Sunshine do you know where the cokes are?

Nalyd: Fine, Chimmy, go post the challenge... Remember to include paragraph form, spelling, grammar, due Thursday...

Dark: Nayld can I get off this bench now?

Sunshine: Well, Dark... go straight for 3.5 miles, turn left, go three feet, jump off the waterfall, avoid the raphids, journey through the desert, fight off the giant epic man-eating kangaroo, and in its lair you'll find a fridge, which should have cokes in it unless I forgot to go shopping again. *long pause* Or you could just look in the fridge that's right behind you. (XD)

Dark: Can you get it because Nayld told me to stay on this bench and no Diet

Tye: Can you guys review the stories from last week, even though it doesn't matter anymore? Everyone wants you to.

Dark: Hey Tye can you get me a soda?

Tye: *tosses Dark a Coke*

Dark: Hey it's Smirnoff!

CK11: *comes in with Cherry Coke* mmmm...

Tye: For the challenge, can we write about when they were in kindergarten? I've been thinking of a funny story involving Geoff, Trent, Duncan, and the principal's office for a while now.

Chimmy:Sure, as long as it meets the requirments.

Shane: If it's alright, may I do the kindergarden thingy too?

Chimmy:As long as it's not a copy of Tye's.

Shane: From what I just read, I highly doubt that.

CK11: My story's the only one up. What do you mean? (Why should it be in paragraph form?)

(Chimmy:Cause Nalyd told me to. XD)

Weblykinly: Hey, Chimmy, Sunshine or Nalyd what did you like and dislike about my story, last time! I've been wondering lately.

CK11: Same. (Did I do paragraph form right?)

(Chimmy:I don't think I'm allowed to comment...)

Turnertang: I think my story should be up today or tomorrow!

Shane: Mine should be up tonight.

Kenzen:Hey guys sorry team but i cant get my story up this week i hope i will be safe I will put my story up next week though

Shane: It's alright. I understand.

Kenzen:Thanks well it is Christmas week and i have H1N1 and so on...(Gifts, stress, headaches)

Turnertang: My story is up!!

Kenzen:Wish me luck guys i will need it

Challenge Three
For this week's challenge, you have to write about one or more TDI characters as babies/toddlers! It must be written in paragraph form, have proper spelling and grammar, and at least on TDI baby. The story must be about a typical day (Or not so typical!) in the young character's life. This story is due on Thursday, December 24. Merry Crossmas, everyone! (XD)

Judging
Nalyd: Chimmy gets Bass, Sunshine gets Gophers.

Chimmy's Reviews
Benthegame: No story, no review.

Jason: No story, except a title.

Kenzen: Again, only a title.

NIzzy:It sounds like it would have been epic…if you had only finished.

Shane:IMO, this was the best story this week. Everyone was is character, and I had several LOL moments. …why did I feel attracted to Trent after this story? XD, but that's beside the point. Awesome job!

Tdafan:It was funny…from what I could see. You didn’t complete your story.

Tdifan1234: No story, no review.

Tye: Epic XD. Everyone was in character, and the boys seemed to be having a great time! However…the story seemed to end rather abruptly. I would have LOVED to see more!

Sunshine's Reviews
Sunshine: First of all, I would like to give HUGE APOLOGIES both for my lateness this week and my lack of reviews the past two weeks. I'll do my best to be better with reviews from now on!

Cards777- No story, no review.

COKEMAN11- This explains so much. XD Courtney is hilarious in this story, and I love how much you made her act like a real-life little kid, especially in the first paragraph where she's asking all those questions. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues either. However, please try to split things into different paragraphs; don't have several people speaking in one paragraph. Other than that, great job!!!

Darkdonpatch- This was a pretty funny story (LOL at Dun-bear XD). Unfortunately, it's overflowing with grammar issues, usage issues, and so forth. To name a few: there were missing commas, quotation marks, periods, and other forms of punctuation in several places. The word "there" was used where it should have been "they're". Finally, things like "-His parents were speechless-" should have simply been "His parents were speechless.", rather than a heading. Keep things like this in mind in the future!

GM- This was pretty cool, if a bit weird... and they didn't really seem like little kids. I like the idea of a little kid detective team/secret agent thingy, but it would have been nice (and funny XD) if you'd made it more obvious that they were little kids somehow, like maybe having their "secret base" be a playhouse made from a cardboard box or something. Also, like CK11, don't have multiple people speaking in a single paragraph. Finally, I think "coldasack" should be written "cul-de-sac". Overall, a pretty good story, except for the aforementioned issues.

KoopaKidJr.- This was actually pretty cute. LOL at the fudgesicle. XD Though short, it was pretty much a complete story, and I noticed no spelling or grammar issues. However, I don't see how Owen could "run away", as you wrote, if he was learning how to walk in the story. XD Nice job overall!

Turnertang- L. O. L. That was pure hilarious insanity. XD I feel so bad for that poor Mary. However, some of the events seemed a little too random, coming out of nowhere. I wish you'd either shown when all the events happened or had transistions. Also, I notice your writing seems to always use the format, "'[Blah Blah Blah],' [person] said/other word meaning said as [actions]." If you were to use different sentence structures in your writing and mix it up a bit, it would be a lot more interesting and a lot more exciting. Keep that in mind, okay?

Weblykinly- What you had up of this was pretty cute. Lindsay was very in character! XD However, you had some punctuation issues. First of all, when putting commas at the end of someone speaking, the comma should be inside the quotation marks. Secondly, make sure that you end someone speaking with some form of punctuation, in particular a comma, question mark, or exclaimation point. I assume the mispelling of Martha as "Marfa" towards the end was intentional. XD I hope you're here next week and finish your story, as I think you can be a really great author with a little improvement.

YoshiPerson- No story, no review.

And the winner is...
Nalyd: It goes without saying that the Bass lose AGAIN and Shane is the best of the worst! Shane, take a moment here to discuss with your team who you will nominate.

Tye: I say you shouldn't pick Kenzen, Jason, NIzzy, or Tdafan. They've had stories all the time except this once. Ben has missed one story, and Tdifan has missed all of them. I say you pick them.

Shane: It's a bit of an honor to be BOW, I guess. About sending someone, I agree with you. I know who I'm sending, please know that this is not easy for me to type. I send, Ben and Tdifan.

Dark: *setting up a prank for Nayld* ahahahahaah this is going to be so good.....*sees a note in Nayld's office and looks at it.....oh my gawd that is so corny *puts note in pocket*

Chimmy:*bursts into Nalyd's office* Hey, Renn-....wait, you aren't Nalyd!

Shane: Should I go get Nalyd? He's in the IRC.

Dark:...................*looks at chimmy in a state of shock and look pale* uhhhhhh *runs out with out her seeing his face*.

Chimmy:...who was that?! *gasps* It might have been....A MURDERER!!! *starts looking for Nalyd's body XD*

Dark: Oh ****, oh man this suck I almost got eliminated man why me and my naiveness!

Chimmy:*continues looking for body, ends up finding a secret picture XD*

Shane: Um, guys? Should I get Nalyd?

Chimmy:Ewww! *chucks picture out window XD*

Dark: *walks around but sees that his ID is gone* Oh no If my ID is there then Chimmy might eliminate me!

Chimmy:*trips into glue just before seeing Dark's ID XD*

Dark: aw man *sees Chimmy stuck in glue and helps and grabs his ID and leaves* close one!

Chimmy:NUUUU!!! THE MURDERER NEARLY GOT MEH! (XD fail)

Dark: Oh and Chimmy there is no bloody Murder Nayld just at his Mcdonalds

Chimmy:*gasps* YOU'RE THE MURDERER?! (XD more fail)

Dark: *has hoodie on so Chimmy doesn't know me and my voice is lighter* No I am not the murderer the was none and now you see I am now L....(Death Note refence)

Chimmy:*is confused, tilts head* So WHO IS the murderer? (XD)

Dark: There is none there hasn't been any you can go to your dorm now and relax

Chimmy:Wait, I have a dorm!? I've been sleeping on the floor for the pasr 2 weeks! (XD)

Dark: Thats why I haven't had a roommate!

Elimination Ceremony Three
Nalyd: Shane, nominees and why, please.

Shane: The first one is: Ben. The reason: He missed a story this time and last time. The second one is: Tdifan. The reason: She missed every single story the whole time. Tdifan, I'm so sorry. This isn't easy for me to type.

Nalyd: Okay, Ben and Tdifan, each of you, tell me why you deserve to stay.

Tdifan: Just eliminate me. I don't even have time to do this. With studying for midterms and other big tests, I can't be writing a new story every week. and besides, with my schedule, you can see that I can't even type a paragraph! Good luck remaining contestants and may the best author win. I'm really sad to leave this way since I know that there were people that wanted to enter but missed sign ups (like I always do for nalyd's camps XD). Bye, guys.

Kenzen:Noooo *grabs her leg as she walks to bus*NOOOO (XD)

Nalyd: I completely agree with you, Tdifan. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Week Four Chat
Nalyd: Alright, who went in my office?

GM: I don't know. *walks away*

Chimmy:I don't know, Nalyd! I heard someone in there, so I went to check, but then they left before I could see them! And while searching for evidence, I found their ID but I tripped in glue before I could see it!

Shane: The person was........ YOU! *points to Dark*

Nalyd: Well, well, well, "Listen up, everyone! Stay out of my office, or you're ELIMINATED." Back in week one chat.

Sunshine: Um... does that include me? 'Cause I've been using your filing cabinet as my own apartment for the past four weeks... (XD)

Chimmy:And does that include me, too? Cause I've been in there several times...

Nalyd: I'm referring to the contestants, I.E. Dark. However, I will allow it to pass THIS TIME. Consider this a Kwanzaa miracle.

Chimmy:OK!

Sunshine: IT'S A FESTIVUS MIRACLE!!!!! (XD)

Chimmy:*dances*

Dark: Why does everyone blame me *pouts* because I didn't do it as I recalled it I knocked myself outside *flash back: *on skateboard but then skateboard flips and Dark knocks himself out*

Koops: Nobody trusts anybody here Dark.

Dark:................so?

Kenzen:*hugs sunshine*You remind me of a potato(XD)

Shane: *sighs and is depressed*

Chimmy:What's wrong, Shane?

Shane: It's silly, really, but I had to nominate one of my best friends on the wiki. I know she dropped out, sorta. but it dosn't change anything. I just hope my team wins for once so we don't have to send anybody.

Chimmy:I feel your pain...nearly every week of TDA3 one of my friends was up for elimination.

Shane: Thanks, Chimmy. *hugs Chimmy* You wanna hear something funny? When I was working on my story for last weeks challenge, I accidently erased it. I clicked out and I started over. Then I found out that you should always save before you copy and paste things.

Jason: I'm so quiet. Its wierd around here.

Nalyd: Dark we know it was here, don't let it happen again. :/ *Walks into office*

Chimmy:Wow....

GM: Ohh...... IT'S A FUN TIME TO LAUGH AND PLAY!!! No wait finish a poem. (XD)

Dark: Oh yeah Nayld I left a little surpise in there *in's the cake prank XD*

Shane: I think I'm done. I'll probably still edit it from time to time.

Kenzen:So much typing

Cards: It's not my best Haiku, but the other one I had didn't fit into the regulations for Haiku.

Shane: Um.... Cards......... I already did one of Katie and Sadie.

CK11: It really doesn't matter, there are a lot of K&S poems here.

Shane: That, wasn't my best week.

Challenge Four
Nalyd: This week you will be writing poetry based on Total Drama! You can do a haiku, a limerick, or a sonnet. Do the poems right, or don't submit one at all. They will be judged on creativity, originality, spelling, and if you did the poem type correctly. (JUDGES - If somebody didn't do a type of poem right, don't tell them until its time to judge)

Judging
Nalyd: Chimmy will get gophers, and Sunshine will get Bass.

Nalyd: I'm counting which poems count and which don't.

Cards777 - Well done. COUNTS

COKEMAN11 - Bad news, "They could still be in love" is six syllables. DOESN'T COUNT

Darkdonpatch - Not a haiku. DOESN'T COUNT

GM - Its a limerick. COUNTS

KKJ - Haiku. COUNTS

Turnertang - "The show started to end." is six syllables. DOESN'T COUNT 

Weblykinly - Not any of the poems. DOESN'T COUNT

YoshiPerson - Not any of the poems. DOESN'T COUNT

The Writing Gophers have 3 poems that count.

Benthegame - No poem. DOESN'T COUNT

Jason - Not a sonnet. DOESN'T COUNT

Kenzen - "The twenty-two arrived." Six syllables. DOESN'T COUNT

NIzzy - No poem. DOESN'T COUNT

Shane - "While one is kind of fat" Six syllables DOESN'T COUNT

Tdafan123 - Incorrectly done limerick. DOESN'T COUNT

Tyedye - Perfect. COUNTS

Nalyd: Sunshine, Chimmy, I hope this helps you decide the winning team and Best of the worst.

Chimmy:I think it's pretty obvious that that the Writing Gophers win, and the BOW is Tye.

Nalyd: I agree completely.

Elimination Ceremony Four
Nalyd: Tye, nominees (both) and why please.

Tye: Ben and NIzzy. Neither of them had poems this week.

Nalyd: Ben, NIzzy, why should you stay?

Nalyd: Okay, I've waited long enough. Ben, time to go.

Week Five Chat
Nalyd: Fourteen are left...

Chimmy:Who's turn is it to think of the challenge?

Dark: I think Sunshine or something *has wine in hand*

CK11: *is writing TDK deleted scene called "R.I.M.D."*

Dark: is there any soda?

YP: Whatever the challenge is, I hope we win!

Tye: Less than 700 words?!?!? Are you insane?!?!?!?

Shane: WHAT!?! Well, if I don't submit one, it'll be my first. *thinks for a moment* I can do this! Time to get creative.

CK11: *thinking out loud* How will I qualify for national chess? Hmm...sounds good. Then insert the RIMD, Rats in my Dress... (XD)

Shane: DONE! I can also tell you how many words are in it if you include the characters and title, 646 words.

CK11: DONE!

Kenzen:I am working on mine now it is ok if i modernize it right

CK11: Mine is modernized.

Shane: Mine too.

Challenge Five
This week, you must write a parody of a fairytale! You must say which fairytale you are using. You do not need to say which TDI character is replacing which fairytale character, but if it isn't clear points will be deducted. The catch; you can only use up to seven-hundred words! It will be judged on if it fit the original without being a copy, spelling, and grammar. If it is over 700 words, don't even submit it.

Judging
Nalyd: Sunshine gets Bass, Chimmy gets Gophers. Saturday at 12:00 eastern the elimination ceremony starts...

Chimmy's Reviews
Cards: No story, no review.

Cokeman: Um…how am I supposed to say this….this was an epic story! You captured the characters perfectly, added several twists to the story, and best of all, I didn’t see any spelling or grammar mistakes! Exceptional job!

Dark: Well, it was definetly under 700 words….however, you had lots of spelling and grammar mistakes. You didn’t have any new twists added to the story, so….yeah.

Greenmagic: Well…first of all, I’m sorry that memory thing happened again. The Chris and Chef thing was…interesting, and the story seemed like it would have been very good if you had finished it. On the bright side, I didn’t see any spelling mistakes, though I did notice one or two grammar mistakes.

KoopaKid: Well…THAT was interesting…I loved Lindsay’s comments, especially the last one. I’m not sure if breaking the fourth wall takes points off, though. I didn’t notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and it was under 700 words, so great job!

Turnertang: There’s really nothing to say…except that this was really good! It was under 700 words, and I didn’t notice spelling or grammar mistakes! However, it seemed to stick to the basic plot of the story. I would have loved it if you had added a twist.

Weblykinly: This was pretty good! I loved the fact the Owen was the giant. However, I noticed some grammar mistakes. And again, I’m not sure if breaking the fourth wall allows me to deduct points.

YoshiPerson: No story, no review.

Results
Nalyd: I read over the stories, and the Gophers win AGAIN. The Gophers, kicking butt and taking names. I can't pick a best person from the Bass, so I want you all to discuss it here for a while.

Shane: Darn it! I thought we could actually win it this time.

Kenzen:It might be to late but NIzzy and Tyedye neither of them had ther story finished

Shane: Sorry dude. It is to late. Tye and Tdafan are being nominated. Sorry guys.

Elimination Ceremony Five
Nalyd: Hm... *randomly picks* Shane, who do you think should be nominated and why?

Shane: I really don't wanna do this, but I have no choice. (Soul Calibur reference FTW) Anyway, first one, is Tdafan. The reason: He hasn't done the best in this compitition. Number Two: Tye. I'm so sorry dude. I didn't have a good reason for the others. The reason: He missed the story this week. I'm so sorry to both of you.

Nalyd: Good picks. Tdafan, Tye, each of you tell me why you should stay.

Tdafan: I deserve to stay because,FYI Shane! I worked hard!Plus,atleast I had SOMETHING for each week!Now,I hate to bring up that stuff,especially since Tye is a great friend of mine,but it's true.I'm ok with getting this place,I guess,but please let me get farther

(Sunshine: I AM SO, SO SORRY!!!! I have been really, really busy this week and haven't had a chance to get online. HUGE, HUGE, HUGE apologies for not being able to do reviews. Hopefully, I will be able to do reviews next week... again, very, very sorry... :

(Chimmy:It's OK, Sunshine...if it makes you feel better, I finished my reviews at 11:58 AM XD)

Tye: I have absolutely no excuse for why I shouldn't be here, because I know that I forgot my story. I'm not going to brag about how I've been BOW twice, or how amazing my writing skills are, because, honestly, they aren't that amazing. I understand completely if you decide to keep Tdafan over me, and I'll try my best to come back at the merge. Everyone here is a great author, or could become great. I know everyone slips up sometimes, like now. I do not wish to be eliminated this early, but if you decide to keep Tdafan and eliminate me, I deserved it for not doing my story. I would, however, like you to consider keeping me in, because I personally think I have great potential as an admin and an author, and I would love to keep competing. I hope I didn't bore you, and I shall be preparing for my, almost immenent, elimination.

Nalyd: The person leaving Total Drama Author 4 is... Tdafan. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Week Six Chat
Nalyd: *works on the hall of authors*

Turnertang: *Watches TV* This is a funny show!

Chimmy:I keep forgetting whose turn it is to come up with the challenge....if it's mine, though, I have something planned! ^^

NIzzy: Yay! Challenge! ^^

Nalyd: Your turn, Chimmy.

CK11: Tdafan eliminated fourth instead of second. *looks back to his three times in the bottom two last season with TBTDIF* Tdafan "saved" me that time. Then boom! Elimination. Then right when I came back, Boom! Elimination. But it's a new season! *dances*

Shane: I feel bad. I know I was picked randomly but still. Oh, and when's the merge?

Dark: I am surprise I got this far.

Jason: I can wait until next challenge...

Webly: I would like to see who would be voted out if my team finally lost!

Kenzen:I hear that*cradles sprained wrist*

Tye: Sooo... I'm guessing that there's no challenge this week?

Jason: I think so. Its already Wensday...

Shane: I hope I can do the challenge this week. I currently sick and sad. I'll do my best, though, to get a story up.

Kenzen:Maybe Nalyd and Chimmy and sunshine will pounce with a random challenge tomorrow

Nalyd: Guys, I am so sorry for the lack of challenge. No challenge this week, no elimination, you can have a week off.

Dark: YAH! FREE WEEK!

NIzzy: YEAH!

Kenzen:Yes

Tye: Hey! I just realised (British spelling ftw, XD) something! We didn't lose this week! *dances* (XD)

Kenzen:But we didn't win either

Tye: So? Neither did they! *dances more* (XD)

NIzzy: *Caramelldanses* (FAIL XD)

YP: Hello peeps!!

Nalyd: Chimmy, please post a challenge.

Kenzen:You should do making a character page next challenge that looked fun last season

Chimmy:Oh, it was! I had so many ideas rushing through my head....I REALLY wanted to do the male one, but everyone else was doing him....so I did female, and it was great! *realizes she's ranting XD*

Kenzen: I still want to do this i am going to finish TDF chapter then work on this(I get TDF chapter done first so i can proof read before putting up)

Shane: How long has the challenge been up? Anyway, this could not be at a worser time. If I don't get a story up, I'm sorry.

Shane: Never mind, it's up.

Jason: Bass, I don't think I could write a story this week. I'm sorry.

Challenge Six
Chimmy:This weeks challenge, you will be writing about one or more TDI character on a road trip with their family and friends! It will be judged on spelling, grammar, creativity, the usual stuff. It is due on Friday.

Judging
Nalyd: Sunshine, please judge the Bass' stories. Chimmy, please judge the Gophers' stories.

The Decision
Nalyd: I am VERY sorry to say that, once again, there are no reviews. The seven Gophers posted three complete stories. The five Bass posted three stories. The Gophers LOSE! Gophers, discuss who will be eliminated here.

Weblykinly: Sorry but id pick Cards or Dark (dark isn't a strong player, sorry but its very true) and cards didn't post her/his in.

YP: I agree.

(Sunshine: ...sorry... again... DX This week I'll do reviews, I promise!!! I would've done them today but I was offline pretty much all day... again, major sorries...)

(Jason: YES! BASS WIN! XD)

(Chimmy:Super sorry...I was at a movie most of the day, but then we had to get dinner....again, really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really sorry...I know I should have done them yesterday, but I was working on my fanfic...I'm such a lazy *ss...)

(Dark:So at least I posted a story and finshed it!)

CK11: I agree with those picks...won't we have a BoW?

Elimination Ceremony Six
Nalyd: So... Dark. Who did your team nominate and why?

Dark: huh?

Dark: Oh me and Cards77

Nalyd: Okay. Cards, Dark, why do each of you deserve to stay?

Dark: I deserve to stay because, well at least i have been trying to play! and I came here to be a better author, but If I must go then I will, but at least I have been doing the challenges, when though there poor at least you can read it and it's not blank!I think I deserve to stay, but i will go if I must.

Nalyd: The person leaving Total Drama Author 4 is... Cards777. Dark is not the best author here, but he comes every week and writes. That's more than you have done, my friend. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Week Seven Chat
Nalyd: There goes a great author...

Kenzen:I see it as that and there goes a threat XD

Chimmy:Yeah...(It's your turn to post the challenge, right? I don't wanna forget again DX)

Nalyd: I'll post the challenge.

CK11: I see it as "He was a good author, but now, I'm one step closer..."

Tye: I see it as "WE FINALLY WON ONE!" (XD)

Dark: I survived this week

Shane: I'm sorry but, FINALLY! WE FINALLY WON ONE! Sorry for gloating. I'm just so stoked!

Kenzen:Yeah we did XD

Turnertang: Gophers, we must win this time!

Dark: Mokay

NIzzy: Yay! We won a challenge! ^^

Shane: Aw crap! This'll be hard. Can we have an extra week to do this?

GM: Guys, that stupid memory thingy happened again and I can't my story up. That's the same thing that happened last week and someone will come and fix on Sunday.

Challenge Seven
This week, you must write parodies of songs, but turn them into Total Drama! The chorus may be repeated. It will be judged on spelling, and creativity. Due Friday!

Judging
Nalyd: I'LL be judging both teams this week.

GOPHERS: BASS:
 * Cokeman - No song, no review. Well that was easy! I wonder why Sunshine and Chimmy always take so long for this...
 * Dark - Can you give me a link to the original song, cause the one I found doesn't have lryics with the same syllable count as yours. Good lyrics though, pretty creative. Terrible comma grammar however.
 * GreenMagic - No song, no review.
 * KoopaKidJr. - I am very glad you changed, because I was going to rate you very lowly for Ugly Face because you had it in a blog post already. I really liked this one, very well done.
 * Turnertang - Well done. Quite a few spelling errors. I liked how this one was about the series, not a character.
 * Weblykinly - Leaving out parts of the song made it difficult to follow, and there really wasn't left when you finished. I am not sure what this song is about honestly...
 * YoshiPerson - Incomplete. Too many of the lyrics were the same as the original.
 * Jason - I have no idea what this is, so I'll mark it as incomplete.
 * Kenzen - I really enjoyed this song, and it was one of my favorites. HOWEVER, you had lots of issues with syllables and such.
 * NIzzy - I'm dissappointed you dropped a verse. My ears hurt from the peppiness (just kidding). I think too many of the lyrics were the same as the original.
 * Shane - This one actually isn't too bad, and its fun to sing along to. Couple syllable problems.
 * Tye - Pretty good, but I believe it repeats itself quite frequently. I like the song you picked.

Decision
Nalyd: The Bass win by a long shot. KoopaKidJr. you are the best of the worst. You can talk to your team about it if you want, but it is your final decision who to nominate.

Elimination Ceremony Seven
Nalyd: KKJ, who are you nominating and why? (Both people, please?)

Dark: I am scared!

Koops: I'm deciding to choose GM for not submitting his song and YP for barely doing challenges.

Nalyd: GM, YP, why do you deserve to stay?

Dark: I am safe!

Webly: Yay! So am i

Dark:.......

GM: I think I deserve to stay because I have been having memory problems lately, but on Sunday some guy is going to fix it. But, the real reason is that I actually try to do challenges. Please keep me in!

Kenzen:I have to say one thing though...........................I drop out, Why-I dont have time to write for this with one fic and another on the way and i also have school scouts and other stuff i am sorry for just taking a spot to drop out later in the game but i know i have become a better author with this and i would like to say thanks but this is my choice and no one else's. I wish luck to the others have a feeling you all will rock good luck...................Bye

Nalyd: Okay, Kenzen. I respect that. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

CK11: *is confused as to why he wasn't nominated* Oh, well. Sorry, team! At least I survived.

Kenzen:I love buses*runs to bus gets in and yells from window Good luck to you all*throws his autobiography out the window*Read that*falls out bus window and chases bus as it drives off*(XD leavin in style)

Dark: *grabs book*.....*flips through pages* cheap,lame,idiotic and lame * throws book*

Shane: Even when we win we lose a member.

Dark: just like Nonny

Nalyd: *On cell phone* We're going to need the bus back. *Public Bus of Losers returns* YoshiPerson, it's time for you to go. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

CK11: That was unexpected.

Shane: I agree, I wasn't expecting that.

Koops: At least my BOW mark this week didn't go empty-handed. (laughs evilly randomly)

Dark: *blinks* 2 people left at the same time

Week Eight Chat
Nalyd: The merge isn't this week, don't bother asking.

Turnertang: Okay dokay.

Shane: Darn it......... Oh well, our team just needs to win again!

Webly: I get why, not everyone is a best seller here!

Shane: I guess I could see that. Anyway, come on everybody! Let's do something! I'm ready! WOOT!

Koops: We better have a fun challenge this week!!!

Dark: I feel insulted

CK11: Koops said it.

Shane: YAY! I got a story up! It took me three days, but it's finally up!

Shane: Tye, please get a story up. Please. And when are the reviews?

Challenge Eight
This week you will be going back to fanfic writing. Your job is to write the next episode of Total Drama Action! Duncan has won, Beth's got Brady, Chris has a wig. (Just saying.) You can write for the Duncan ending or the Beth ending. You can write a new Aftermath, or all of them leaving and going home, or something else if you have a better idea. Due Thursday. Please end the story with "The End" or something of the sorts. This will be judged on spelling, creativity, grammar, and originality. (So we don't want a rip-off of one of the other Aftermaths.)

Judging
Nalyd: Chimmy will judge Gophers, Sunshine has Bass.

Chimmy's reviews
CK: LOL! This story was so funny. I loved Chris’s line, “Everybody sleeps with a teddy bear!” LOL at Owen!! Every single character was in character, and the episode almost seemed like it could be a real episode! However, it seemed to end rather abruptly, and I feel like you could have extended it by interviewing more of the characters.

Dark: Well…it was definitely original. However, it was absolutely filled with grammar and spelling issues, such as "SPENSE YOUR FIRED!” instead of, “SPENSE, YOU’RE FIRED!” Try to improve these issues in the future, as they are tying down your stories.

GM: No story, no review.

KoopaKidJr.: This was definitely the most original story, in my opinion. Great idea to use just the unqualified contestants instead of the more-focused on characters. I loved Noah and Eva in this, and Tyler was pretty good. However, I wish you had at least incorporated a bit of the hyped up characters, as you only focused on the 7 that didn’t qualify. It didn’t seem like much of a reunion or aftermath, but it wasn’t stated in the rules that it had to be one of those.

Turnertang: This was pretty cool! I liked the randomness of the objects that would fall on the contestants, and good idea using only some of them, though it seemed short. I noticed only one grammar mistake, “Now if you lie then your seat will eject and shoot you in the air…there should be an end quotation there.

Weblykinly: Good story! Nice idea with the dramatic speeches. However, it seemed short, and it had a ton of grammar issues. For example, there was “It's Chris McClean signing in saying that was not the last aftermath this is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..not only was there no end quotation, the sentence should have been. “It’s Chris McClean, signing in, saying that this was not the last aftermath, this is!” …Come to think of it, I think that’s a run-on sentence.

Sunshine's Reviews
Sunshine: I actually did my reviews this week! *awaits applause, recieves none* ...moving on...

Jason: This one was all right. I got kind of tired of Beth and Brady's constant lovey-dovey talk, but that's just me. I thought it started and ended kind of abruptly as well, and I would've liked to see a little more of the reuinion (though in all honesty, Chris probably would do an ending like that XD). There were a few minor grammar issues as well, like two people talking in one paragraph and some problems with commas. Other than that, it was pretty good!

NIzzy: This one was funny. I was LOL at Lindsay. "Oh my, is Taylor here?" XD Everyone was very in character. However, there were some minor grammar issues (mostly forgetting commas) and I felt the story started and ended really abruptly; if you'd written a bit more and made the ending seem less rushed, it would have been better. Other than that, not bad!

Shane: This was probably my favorite one of the Bass stories. It was funny, it gave each character some time, all the characters were written realistically, there were emotional moments, there were revelations, all that good stuff. I liked how you introduced Alejandro and Sierra, and made the transition into TD:TM. I think there were some minor grammar issues, but nothing serious. Nice work!

Tye: No story, no review.

Decision
Nalyd: Chimmy, Sunshine, looking over the reviews, who do you think won the challenge?

Sunshine: Hmm... I guess I'd say the Gophers should win, and Shane should be BOW. What do you think, Chim-chim?

Chimmy:I agree!

Sunshine: Well, that was easy! XD

Chimmy:Yup! XD

Sunshine: It really goes a lot faster when I actually decide to contribute! (LOL, I really was busy the past... er... month or so... big sorries for the five or six reviews I missed... >.<;;)

Chimmy:It's OK Sunshine, I've missed my fair shair of reviews.

Nalyd: I agree. Bass lose AGAIN and Shane is the BOW. Shane, you can talk with your team here.

Dark: FINALLY! GOPHERS WON!

Shane: Dark, the Gophers have only lost twice. Anyway, I know the two who I am sending. The first one is Tye: You know, whenever I am BOW, Tye never has a story up. Anywho, Tye didn't get a story up. I'm very sorry Tye. Really, I am. Anyway, the next person in Nizzy. Although Nizzy had a story up, I feel as if Jason has done more or something, as Jason had a better review. Anyway, those are the two I am sending. I am very sorry Tye and Nizzy.

Elimination Ceremony Eight
Nalyd: Shane, who are your nominees and why. (You can copy your above message)

Shane: (Yay copy and pasting!) Anyway, I know the two who I am sending. The first one is Tye: You know, whenever I am BOW, Tye never has a story up. Anywho, Tye didn't get a story up. I'm very sorry Tye. Really, I am. Anyway, the next person in Nizzy. Although Nizzy had a story up, I feel as if Jason has done more or something, as Jason had a better review. Anyway, those are the two I am sending. I am very sorry Tye and Nizzy.

Nalyd: Tye, NIzzy, why do you deserve to stay?

Dark: we all know who is going

Shane: Um, Dark, you can go back to wherever your team is.

Dark:........*runs to his dorm*

Nalyd: The person leaving is... NIzzy. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Week Nine Chat
Jason: Aw, Nizzy's gone! :(

Sunshine: Wow, Tye doesn't get a story up and he still stays... wowzers. Anyhoo, whose turn is it to come up with a challenge, Nalyd? (I assume it's mine since the last time I posted a challenge was week 2 XD)

Nalyd: Tis your turn Sunshine.

Shane: I'm assuming it's not the merge. T_T

Sunshine: Cool, I have an idea. I shall contact you on another wiki with the idea!

Sunshine: *speaking to an invisible Sprinklemist* I'm so glad you came up with this challenge last season. It's such an awesome idea! ^^

Chimmy:The male one is hot XDD

Sunshine: Really? Whoot, I made a hot guy! (Man, I drew those pics forever ago... XD)

Chimmy:Then again, it could be because he's a Noah edit...XD JK

Sunshine: Possibly... Noah has made it onto my Unhealthy Obsessions List! XD

Chimmy:*pumps fist in air XD*

CK11: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Cody has made it onto my random obsessions list. Courtney and Izzy lake up the unhealthyness. XD

Shane: Okay, I have a question about the character. Do we have to make templates? And when is this due? I could do it right now. I just wanna know if we should make a template.

Sunshine: No, you don't have to make a template. It's due Thursday, as always.

Shane: Awesiemo.

CK11: Donezorz.

Shane: Me too! *high fives CK11*

Dark: actually-*sees random floating fish in his face*-What the f-*commercial break* -wait this is a TV show!!!

CK11: I'm kinda hoping we can have early judging since everyone's done...

Challenge Nine
For this week's challenge, you will be creating a character profile for one of the characters shown here. This profile should include the character's name, personality, background, and reason for joining the Total Drama series. You can include an audition tape if you'd like. This will be judged on originality, creativity, believability, and the usual spelling and grammar. Good luck!

Judging
Nalyd: Here's my judging... (Sunshine and Chimmy miss it again)
 * COKEMAN11 - Really well done!
 * Darkdonpatch - Lots of grammar mistakes in the Bio section, but otherwise looks okay.
 * GM - This one was good too.
 * KoopaKidJr. - Fabulous! (Sorry, couldn't resist. XD) I thought this was a good one, quite original.
 * Turnertang - Good job. However, you misspelled y'all.
 * Weblykinly - A little on the darker side... Putting "How to Manipulate Retards" in there makes me rank this character really low. That's a terrible thing to say.
 * Jason - Nice job on this.
 * Shane - I like this character. Well done.
 * Tye - You did two, which is cool. I like how you put the most effort in of anybody on your team.

The Decision
Nalyd: No team wins this week. COKEMAN11 and Tye, I want both of you to nominate ONE person for your respective teams. Of the two people nominated, I'll pick one to go. You two can talk to your teams here.

(Chimmy:Oh crap...maybe I should move the date for TDL...)

Webly: I know mine might have sounded mean but Heather was pretty mean. And I knew being the person who taught Heather all of her skills. She had to be a little darker. So, please don't nominate for mine. But I think we need to nominate Dark who has a lot of grammar issues and other problems. I totally understand if you pick me though.

CK11: Sorry, Webly, but I'm nominating you. Forgive me if you're eliminated.

Webly: I know I'm going but I'm still kinda shocked you picked me. The other team is better than me so I'm sure I'm eliminated :(.

Dark: Sorry Webs,....*jkust relized that she tried to nominate me* HEY! AT LEAST I HAVE DILIGENT!

Shane: I really don't have a say in Tye's decision.

Chimmy:Um...aren't Webly and CK both boys?

Shane: That's what I thought.

CK11: If I'm a girl, why am I COKEMAN11? I'm male.

Webly: I'm also male, thank you very much!

Dark: It was a purpose-typo

Tye: Shane hasn't missed a single story yet, so I'm nominating Jason. I think everyone on what remains of the team has great potential, so I hate nominating, especially with only 2 people to choose from. I assume that if Jason does go, the merge is next week. If Webly goes, I don't know.

Elimination Ceremony Nine
Nalyd: CK, your nominee and why. Tye, your nominee and why. (Come on, guys. Don't have all day. XD)

(Sunshine: I woke up this morning realizing I'd completely forgotten to do reviews. ><;; HUGE apologies, guys. I promise next time, I'll get them done the day of!!!)

CK11: I changed my nomination. I nominate Dark, because although he comes every week and tries his best, he has spelling and grammar issues. Now, they have gotten better, but not enough to escape nomination.

Dark: You know what? I quit, I'm going out either way, so I quit! Thanks for having me here, but there is no possible way I can beat Jay in this ceremony, I am just going to quit!

Nalyd: Dark, are you absolutely sure?

Dark: and it's not just that, I think Jay deserves to stay more then me, so yes I am I think I am proud of myself of getting this far, this is also cause Jay is my friend......

CK11: Also, Dark, remember that while you do have grammar and spelling issues, Jay hasn't submitted a story every week like you have.

Dark: Still if you come down to it, Jay is a better author then me

Jason: Dark, please don't quit. You know how many people wanted to be on TDA4 that didnt make it on?

Dark: I am still a little bit iffy on this........

Koops: If Dark doesn't quit, then Nalyd is gonna have a tough decision to make.

Dark: Well then, I'll stay for this, Nalyd I am still in, we can't just waste a dramatic moment,huh (I hope ya'll are happy)

Nalyd: I have an easy decision to make. This person missed three weeks in a row. The person leaving is... GM. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers.

Koops: I didn't see that coming.

Week Ten Chat
Nalyd: Sunshine, Chimmy, I'll post the challenge this week.

Dark: well that was a shocker.....

Koops: Can we PLEASE have a merge?

Jason: That WAS a shocker. I agree with Koops.

CK11: After nominating Dark, I was like..."Why didn't I nominate GM?" I think I just reconsidered because his computer had memory problems.

Dark: Well i am still in this, though

Dark: Wait is the merge this week?

Koops: I hope so.

Webly: I was earlier going to change why I shouldn't be eliminated and tell why not GM. But, I thought everyone knew he was having computer problems. BTW, thank you CK11 for saving me. I'm going to step my game because I know that my team depends on me also! I want a merge too!

Dark: 10 people left, if we have 2 more weeks, then there will only be 6 people who made it to the merge

CK11: Eight people left, and in previous seasons, eight people equals merge.

Dark: I am in here from pure luck, I on't think I am the best author I think I am almost the most mediocre,Which makes me a good author

CK11: ...So no merge and it's poetry week.

Koops: There's 8 people here and we don't have a merge!!!

CK11: *facepalms* Oh, yeah, people return. Two people this season. Next week is the merge, trust me. I know these things. *goes to write poem, does multiple so he is BoW if the Gophers lose XD*

Dark: -_-

Ck11: ...*realizes that he and Turnertang are the only TDAuthor veterans left*

Dark: Here's a limerick I found in an old sheet of paper:


 * The limerick packs laughs anatomical
 * In space that is quite economical,
 * But the good ones I've seen
 * So seldom are clean,
 * And the clean ones so seldom are comical. (Not my competition one)

Turnertang: Go veterans!

Tye: HOLY CRAP! I'm in the final 8! Woot! (also, on a random note, CK, Koops, and I are the only full column left in the hall of authors. XD)

Shane: Ugh, not poetry. Anyway, it's NOT the merge? Crap! Anyway, I really hope it is soon. Anywho, I'm sick you guys. I'll try to get a poem up.

Koops: I think this is coming down to any team's game now.

CK11: More like anyone's game.

Challenge Ten
Nalyd: Since the poetry week was a complete flop, we're doing it again. Everyone has to write a TDI related limerick. Due Thursday.

Judging
Nalyd: I'll be doing the judging this week.
 * COKEMAN11 - I like that you went above and beyond by doing so many. However, your syllable count was off and none of the poems flowed very well.
 * Darkdonpatch - You had a syllable count problem, but I liked this poem.
 * KoopaKidJr. - Same as the last two, syllable count issues messed up the flow of the poems. I liked the Courtney one, and I'm glad you did several.
 * Turnertang - I liked your poems but, once again, none of you really paid attention to syllables.
 * Weblykinly - A thousand points off for mentioning Joe. (Just kidding) These were okay poems.
 * Jason - I love the beginning, but the fifth line is supposed to rhyme with the first two, so I can't count this as the correct kind of poem.
 * Shane - I'm glad you did two, but I think you need to work on syllable count.
 * Tyedye - It saddens me that you've been the BOW three times and you wrote nothing...

Decision
Nalyd: The Gophers win. Shane, when it's time for the elimination, please pick one person to nominate.

Shane: Okay......Um.........I dunno who to pick. Uh......... Tye has done great, but he hasn't done that many challenges. Jason, on the other hand, has been more diligent. Tye has been doing great when he does write a story. Jason has improved dramatically, though. I......I really don't know. Okay, now I know. Jason. You've done amazing. But I feel as if Tye has done better. Listen Jay, I'm sorry. I really don't wanna do this. But I nominate Jason. I am very sorry.

Elimination Ceremony Ten
Nalyd: Okay, Shane, your nominee and why please.

Shane: Okay......Um.........I dunno who to pick. Uh......... Tye has done great, but he hasn't done that many challenges. Jason, on the other hand, has been more diligent. Tye has been doing great when he does write a story. Jason has improved dramatically, though. I......I really don't know. Okay, now I know. Jason. You've done amazing. But I feel as if Tye has done better. Listen Jay, I'm sorry. I really don't wanna do this. But I nominate Jason. I am very sorry.

Nalyd: Jason, why should you stay instead of Tye?

Jason: Okay- I deserve to stay instead of Tye because I believe that on TDA4 I've grown as a writer. Sure, I may not complete stories or anything, but this competiton really helped me out. From Sunny's critizism, to Chimmy's remarks, I took them all in. I want to become a better writer. With all of the critizisim I'm getting, I learn from my mistakes. I want to be here to learn more. To become a better writer than I already am. That is why I think I should stay instead of Tye.

Nalyd: I agree. Tye, it's time to go. Now you need to walk down the Book Check-Out of Shame, and ride the Public Bus of Losers. Also, everyone, I have a surprise... *opens doors, revealing DJ Spenstar and Tdafan123* They're ba-ack!

Shane: AWESOME! SPENNY!

Dark: Spenny was never in the contest.......OH WELL

Tdafan:WAHOO! :D

Dark:..great, week 5 is back

Shane: AWESOME! TDAFAN! *high fives Tdafan*

Tdafan:Shane! Nice to see ya bud!

Koops: I'm guessing you two are on the Bass?

Turnertang: Spenny wasn't here before.

Koops: I know, I'm asking are they both on the Bass?

Tdafan:So, what's up?

Spenny: Hey guys! Ima here at last!

Spenny: At last, I am in! And I might win! Hey that rhymed! xD

Dark: is Tdafan or Spenny wins, that will be the 1st time ever, someone who returns wins, and a Bass will win XD

Spenny: Then it's time I made a few firsts around here! xD

Shane: You don't think I could win? XD

Spenny: You're a bass, so if you win, there will be a first. I still think you can win, Shane

CK11: Spenny's here? Darn, that means all of my chances at winning are gone XD

Shane: Thanks Spenny! I feel much better now!

Week Eleven Chat
Nalyd: Hello, final nine. And all of you can feel free to use any of my characters. Just sayin'. (XD)

Jason: Can I use Audrey? or Jessica?

Dark: I am using Steve, permission from Spenny!

Tdafan:Nalyd, can I use Brittany???

Spenny: That means I can use Niles and Jocelyn? Awesome! =D

Challenge Eleven
This week, you must write a non-canon story using characters from the fanfic wiki. It can be a oneshot, a separate competion, an alternate ending, a deleted scene, whatever you desire. However, you MUST have the author's permission, or you can NOT use their character. You cannot use your own characters. You can use characters from multiple stories. This story will be judged on grammar, spelling, creativity, and if you correctly represented the characters you used. This story is due Thursday.

Darkdonpatch's Story
Steve's saneness 

DJ Spenstar's Story
Niles' Guilt

It was the final day for the final two. A living nightmare was almost over. Jocelyn was ever so excited to see her loved ones again, and win the million, but her opponent had something else on his mind. Niles walked back to his hut, sat on his bed, and let his mind wander.

"What have I done?" he said to himself, "I'll never forgive myself. Susan deserved the money more than any of us, and I went ahead and denied her that. And I broke her heart. Why did I do this?"

Niles lied down on his bed, closed his eyes, and attempted to sleep, but couldn't. He'd have to face the jury the next morning, something that he knew he could not do. Why had he been so blind? For the first time, Niles hated being alone. He didn't care that nobody else could spread their germs to him; he had to talk to somebody. And so, Niles left his hut to go to the adjacent one.

Jocelyn was still laughing with delight that Niles had been dumb enough to choose her. After all, she could weave her magic at the final tribal council, and make Niles look like a traitor, which he sort of was, and a villain. She'd have the money in no time flat! When she heard footsteps entering her hut though, Jocelyn's happiness was replaced with fear. That is, until she heard his voice.

"Hey Jocelyn," said Niles, "It's just me, Niles."

"What are you doing here?" she asked, annoyed.

"I needed someone to talk to," said Niles, "Someone who will listen. Will you listen?"

"Sure, why not?" said Jocelyn. Niles was good company. He was a sweet kid, Jocelyn had to admit, which made her almost sad that she would betray him the next day. Almost.

"I've been thinking about Susan," Said Niles, "And about how wrong it was for me to have ditched her like that. I was wrong, and I'm worried that you might use that to your advantage."

Jocelyn smirked, but Niles could not see her in the dark.

"Hey Jocelyn," said Niles, "Could you do me a favor? Could you clear my name at tomorrow's tribal council? If you do, I swear, I'll give you all of my winnings if I win. I just want my peers to know that I'm really an okay guy. And I am a man of my word."

Now it was Niles' turn to smirk. Luckily, Jocelyn couldn't see his nose bleed in the dark.

"Sure!" said Jocelyn.

"Thanks so much," said Niles, and left. Jocelyn waited until Niles' footsteps could no longer be heard, then muttered one word.

"Sucker!"

Tdafan's Story
The sun arose over the green hills.

Brittany looked over at the horizon,"Such a beautiful sunrise."

Her big, plump, brown pig, Fran seemed to nod in agreement, and let out a snort.

(More to come)